by exquisit_taste
Best of luck with the comp, and I hope other entries are of this standard!!!!! ;-)
I enjoyed very much the orchestration of this story, especially the way the writer wove in the music to accompany the erotic play and how she sexed up the action of the threesome in a language that kept it hot or did not reduce it to the bio-mechanical action of a porn movie. At first, the setting of "speed dating" in Las Vegas made it difficult for me to get into an erotic mood as it seemed more like a TV game show, although I did like how the setting gave women choice and power. I enjoyed two women embracing and celebrating their sexuality together. For their next adventure, I would love to see these women making their choices at a swing club, or a nude beach, or just going through ads on an adult internet site together and "interviewing" the men on the phone to find a man able to rise to the challenge of their own erotic heat.