All Comments on 'Naked Wednesday'

Can't wait until next Wednesday!

Man, I could read your stuff all day. Totally enjoyable. Love the character dynamics -- so much going on beneath the surface! And, of course, Ms. D is always a pleasure. Great story.

The sex was great but I also enjoyed the slapstick humor combined with some good banter between the guys and Ms. D. Well done.

Entertaining and well written. Very believable dialogue, too, in a style found only in that magical world of unlimited teen sex. If only . . . A fiver.

Best story I’ve ever read on here, definitely the longest story I’ve stuck around to finish. I didn’t realize I’ve been writing stories trying to get this exact mood until I actually read this. incredibly sexy work man.

Well done! I love your writing style.Good story line and I also liked the banter between Trev, Bro and Ms. D Definitely a 5

Hi, here from the ND contest. Sexy and fun, with really snappy and often humorous dialogue. And now that it's over, I'm going to consider changing my Beretta's nickname to Dubinsky in honor of Ms. D. Great job and good luck in the contest!

Great story but I thought it ended a bit abruptly. A little more dialogue and denouement would have been better. 5*. Good luck.