by distorria
I absolutely loved it, lol it was jus great i mean i never leave comments on here but that was too good
I never leave comments either....but that story warranted a positive one.
its writen very nicely . . i like the discription of the girl. but the story is only mildly sexy . . didnt give me a hard on, but i can apreciate the effort that was put in . . its cute
I think you have a lot of good pieces here that you put together in a kind of half-assed way. I think you should really savor the actual sex, even if it is aggressive and crazy.