All Comments on 'Nando and Will Ch. 05'

I wanted to enjoy this story, but the glaring mistakes in Spanish (both, spelling and grammar) were so distracting, I couldn't. At least in that aspect, this story needed editing.

I really liked this story. keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more.

the commentator "ack" I would have liked to read your comment but what on earth is Ack?????

Pelaam your stories are a trip into another world, I don't profess to be a linguist but you keep me interested

I'm not a linguist either so the Spanish is just a delightful part of the story, correct or incorrect. There isn't enough of it to be distracting unless you want it to be. The characters hold my attention, I love Nando and Will. More please.

Plz plz plz write more about nando and will...it cant end there! thank u!

Would you consider writing about Don Carlos and Roberto from when they first met? Your stories are just so good that I don't want them to end!