by Pelaam
Would you consider writing about Don Carlos and Roberto from when they first met? Your stories are just so good that I don't want them to end!
Plz plz plz write more about nando and will...it cant end there! thank u!
I'm not a linguist either so the Spanish is just a delightful part of the story, correct or incorrect. There isn't enough of it to be distracting unless you want it to be. The characters hold my attention, I love Nando and Will. More please.
the commentator "ack" I would have liked to read your comment but what on earth is Ack?????
Pelaam your stories are a trip into another world, I don't profess to be a linguist but you keep me interested
I really liked this story. keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more.
I wanted to enjoy this story, but the glaring mistakes in Spanish (both, spelling and grammar) were so distracting, I couldn't. At least in that aspect, this story needed editing.