All Comments on 'Nando and Will Ch. 06'

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sugarfairy1137sugarfairy1137over 14 years ago
thank you

Thank you so much for another chapter. I love this story so much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
please continue!!!

i love Nando and Will the most!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome!

Another wonderful chapter :) I love both the pairings of Will/Nando and Carlos/Roberto equally (Although I *think* actually C/R is oh-so-slightly inching ahead in terms of which couple I like more)and as always, the storyline of this chapter was well-written, dynamic and romantic :). What would really be nice to see is Bart finally hook up with someone nice. I thought this chapter would be the one and whilst liking it immensely, I felt sad that at the end W/N and C/R could cuddle up together and poor Bart was all alone!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
excellent

i love all 6 chapters of will and nando thank you for witting them

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Thank you

Once again you have did it again, thanks for the update and I know when the time is right you will tell the story of Don Carlos and Roberto their own beginnings, and Bart would eventually have someone to love also. Good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
what abour bart

Shouldn't Bart meet his "special someone" too?

wisperingwillowwomanwisperingwillowwomanover 14 years ago
I'm Worried About Bart

He should have someon too. He's watched all the people he loves fall in love and get married. I hope it's his turn soon. Messed up how a lot of us get treated like that. I'll be patient though for the rest. I love your stories. LOL I'm at the point of rereading. Anyway thanks for sharing.

geseendgeseendover 13 years ago
bart

please let bart meet someone to love. nice story.

vampirelover201vampirelover201over 13 years ago

please let bart find sume1 seems funny him not being loved

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Bart

I agree. Bart needs to find someone nice.

Great story.

Darby4186Darby4186about 13 years ago
Continue

I am so glad you continued this story. You've already had great character development and there is so much that can be done with this story line. And one your best features here is the mix of people all demonstrating their love to a particular life partner. Love it. Keeeeep writing. I see that it's been a while but please pleasure us with your writing craft

Gayobsessedgirl_1Gayobsessedgirl_1almost 13 years ago
Love It

i love it!!!! You should so write one of Bart finding his love!!! He deserves happiness. Please!!!!! I love this so much. And the sex is hot. :3

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Oh My!!\

A magnificent story. I am aleady in love with Will and Nando but I agree with the others, Bart deserves a real love also.

Will just seems so vulnerable but oh my gosh what a charm. Nando seems so protective and so virile. I would love Will to top just once so that the love making is compatible. Again, Bart just seems so lost and deserving. Don Carlos and Roberto are just a fabulous pair and so settled in their love.

12readnwrite12readnwriteover 12 years ago
Agree with everyone else

Bart is the only one lonely, and clearly, he wasn't satisfied with flings as the author mentioned, it's time he met someone...

TiyeTiyealmost 11 years ago
More

I so thouroghly enjoyed this series and hope there will be more stories with Nando & Will and their families.

70sblkbutterfly70sblkbutterflyalmost 11 years ago

Very much enjoyed this story! 5 stars!! More about these two families please!! Someone needs to have kids; even by way of adoption!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Roberto & Don Carlos

I really enjoyed this story. Would it be possible for you to make a story just about Don Carlos and Roberto.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
When will we see these guys again?

This story as with all your stories is hot, we need more

dirtyricekingdirtyricekingover 9 years ago

Agree with others: Will needs to top for once. I also want Don and his hubby to get a wedding.

dirtyricekingdirtyricekingover 9 years ago

Correcting what I just wrote: Don and Roberto need a wedding.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I don’t like nando much.. i like roberto and carlos tho.

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