All Comments on 'Nanna Akkana Thullu Pt. 01'

by kamasura

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
where are the goods?

Gotta a story to tell?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Get an editor who actually speaks English

This garbled shit is a pain to read and a nightmare to puzzle out. Get a real English speaker (because whatever you think you're saying in proper English here, you're not, by a long, long way) or write in your own language and save people the trouble of telling you how bad your English is. No Stars, this tripe should be deleted and handed to an editor to turn it into legible English.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 9 years ago
better to

It would be better for you to write in a language that you are actually fluent in.

Things like "my cousin sister arrived" confuse people that are not familiar with the culture which you are from, we do not understand what a cousin sister is.

Mixing in many words which are foreign to most readers here will cause them to give you low votes and unkind comments.

kamasurakamasuraover 9 years agoAuthor

Sorry folks, first timer in writing. still hope the writing was not so bad. will definitely try improve and correct the mistakes from this first writeup.

thanks

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