All Comments on 'Narcissa's Slavery Ch. 01'

most of the start was about stuff from the books if you want to turn people on make it longer.

This is exactly what I want to read! Where is the rest of it?

Severus was a dick the whole time, only doing what he had to to stay alive. He'd totally do this.

I know it's non-con, but at the same time, maybe you should put it in celebrities. Severus turns out to be a pretty decent guy by the end.

Harry Potter fanfiction? I'm confused!