All Comments on 'Nat / alie'

Refreshingly different. Loved it.

Well done Jappio!

Promising start. You can definitely make this into a series.

The naughtier side has more erotic adventures until the point where there can only be one.

you should write more about ashley

Really awesome concept, I love the idea and both the girls have great voices. My only complaint is that it ended a bit abruptly. Hope to see more! *****

This was original and well done. A bit short though ; )

Keep em' coming!

I tried just reading the Natalie part and it totally worked. I actually might like it better that way. (I did go back and read that Nat part afterward, but the story really did stand without it.)

Very original with the protagonist. There's a lot of interesting ways that be used.