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Click hereThe problem with focusing all your energy into grappling and wrestling training is that it is very ineffective against multiple opponents at the same time. This was the situation Gnat found himself in now. Two larger defensive ends closing in on him hell-bent on revenge for hurting their teammate. Luckily for Gnat his fathers business partner in the bail bonds company and fellow bounty hunter Duane had taken the time to secretly show Gnat enough boxing basics to defend himself. It might have been better for Gnat that he trained with Duane instead of his father because Duane was more similarly built like Gnat than his father. Duane and Gnat both had tall lean physiques that relied more on leverage and body mechanics to generate punching power than Gnats shorter thicker build that relied on muscle power to smash blows in close quarters.
The player with the aviator shades coming from Gnat's right didn't expect it when Gnat took a half step back and rotated his hip into a stunning left hook into the wide-open chin of the football player. The sound was loud enough to attract the attention of everyone in the water. They all stopped what they were doing to watch the fight play out. Maria was the lone exception who used the distraction to snatch her bikini bottoms from the distracted Emma. The first football player lurched forward and stumbled to the deck floor. The other player locked his arms around Gnat's waist and they crashed to the ground. Gnat was able to roll on top and press his bent elbow into the football player's eye socket. Gnat proceeded to swing wild hooking punches to the football player who was doing his best to cover his face.
Alexis was stunned to find her bikini top in place as she reached to cover her chest from the cell phones and lustful eyes she knew would be waiting for her as she surfaced from the water. Her head breached the water and she was treated to the stunned looks of her classmates at the level of violence her half-brother was inflicting on the football team. Alexis quickly transitioned from relief that she hadn't been exposed to appreciation that her brother had protected her to horror at the realization that her brothers actions were going to have ramifications to her social standing.
- COMMENTS
Pugzillaover 2 years agoAuthorMy art guy stopped doing commission work and that kind of threw me off a bit. Also, my delivery partner who insisted on doing all the driving has been out of the country for a month so I not only have less time to write while I drive but I have to sleep more so I'm rested when it's my turn to drive. I have three Wanda stories started and fleshed out but I don't want to rush them through because they have some of the payoffs the readers have been wanting and I want to do the payoff right.
Pugzillaover 2 years agoAuthorNat gets some boxing basics his father's friend Duane but there is a big difference between being shown the basics and getting a trainer to work with you to maximize your strengths and minimize your weakness. Grandpa Cesar is going to shape Nat physically and mentally. The timeline did skip back a beat or two. I don't want to get too bogged down in details with these it slows output and if I am going to put that much effort into writing it makes more sense to work on my real books. That big dip in production was from writing into a corner and not wanting to do the work of writing my way out of it. That's why the main story got sidelined a bit. Right now I'm just writing stuff to be productive again and hoping I can loop it back around. I have a story waiting approval and another half done and have the plan for the weekend in the woods mapped out. So I think I'm on track.
Pugzillaover 2 years agoAuthorI know and I do appreciate the appreciation. I wrote myself into a corner a bit with the main storyline. I have so much non-erotic stuff to set up for the resolution with the Taus that I have to find a way to wrap around entries with an erotic core at each. It kind of became a chore to produce a chapter that develops the background story with a weak erotic element. Every time I write that Wanda's tits come out in public it kind of dilutes the experience. I've already had her actually have sex with other men. I'm trying to squeeze out as much from that as I can. I'm pretty sure I milked her top getting pulled off one day in high school for everything it was worth. I'm slowly shading in the details. By expanding the cast and settings I can write background while keeping the present stakes artificially high. I know it has been a while since I've been writing this at my best but I do feel a momentum starting to build. I also have a backlog of art to post. I've got several commissions done but for some reason, Literotica is slow approving art. I guess it's not a priority as stories are the meat and potatoes of the site. If anyone is anxious to see it before Literotica posts it, its on my artist's Deviant art page under the name ENFmaster.
Anonymousover 2 years agoAlways glad to see a Pugzilla story, even when there a little off target. Was confused as Nat was being trained by his grandpa, with some nefarious potential brewing. Freshwater Sharks seemed to jump to an alternate timeline where Julie's partner Dwayne was showing him the pugilistic arts. In the grandfather timeline Nat did not seem this close to his sister.
I love how you showed Tad is a such a douchebag that he never let his hair get wet on a tubing trip. Hair products give away.
I can appreciate your apprehension with POV issues. Remember these are fictional characters. Plus just don't even put a character you would not want to see in hairy situations in the story or in duress. Like the playwright Checov said about the gun over the mantle, it shouldn't be there if it is not going to be used by the final act. You tried to tease Alexis having the worst case flash before her eyes. In my option it would have worked better had you played it out with more detail, then snapped back where she almost got unvield. Nat should have saved Maria and Alexis saved herself. As it is written Tad is the protagonist which adds to the sting of nothing happening in the end.
In the end I'd rather have any story then no story, so keep it up Pugz.
