All Comments on 'Natalia and Her Wolf Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Feel better soon!!! Keep writing, too. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Love where the story is going...please keep writing

redlion75redlion75almost 11 years ago

happy birthday from a fellow 7-25 leo as in red =ruby leo= lion

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
awwwwww!

More please !!!!!!!!!!!!

DecadentdessertDecadentdessertalmost 11 years ago

Happy Birthday! My b-day is the 31st so as a fellow Leo, I applaud you, we are a fierce bunch. I am loving the story I am looking forward to update.

Jessie231987Jessie231987almost 11 years ago
thank you for the story

I just want to say Happy Birthday I hope its well and you fell better. I love the story I can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
AAGGHHH!

Omg this is a cliff hanger if I've ever seen one! Please please please don't make us wait too long For the next chapter!! I love this story and I just about screamed with the ending of this chapter. Keep up the good work. Hope you and your daughter gets better soon. Xxxxxx

sammers2008sammers2008almost 11 years ago
cant wait

Love ur stories can't wait for the next part

nickysixnickysixalmost 11 years ago

OMG! I am very upset that a nurse would say all those hateful things to you! Your story is Great!! Hope you feel better soon! And your daughter as well...

angeldustjaangeldustjaalmost 11 years ago
bitch slap

When Natalia recovered she shud av bitch slapped the nurse. It is the baby or the reconnection to her mate that is causing her headaches? Kp it up I'm enjoying ur series and that u both will feel better soon.

FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago
Wow

I've never had a special special special shout out before! I'm all tingly now! :)

Glad I was helpful to you.

I like where you are going with Tal. She is growing up fast. Her power 'issues' are hilarious! Marie's description what happened as Tal malfunctioning was priceless. No drama about it, just calm acceptance. Marie is a fine example of the calm, voice of reason side kick, as opposed to the comedic sidekick. Tal needs that balance.

Write at whatever pace life allows you. Don't stress it. :)

*sends extra hug for your munchkin*

biercebiercealmost 11 years ago
A great story

Love the story. Love the characters. Please share more. Thanks

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 11 years ago
Good story

I had issues with the first couple of chapters but I am glad that I stuck with the story. Your writing has improved and the story is getting more interesting! Sometimes the best writing comes from real life experiences. I am sorry you had such a bad one. Try not to rely too heavily on cliff-hangers. Over-use of them becomes annoying!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
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this is the best story ever

pls pls write on

love it

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedalmost 11 years ago

It makes me laugh that that hospital scene came from real life. Love ur style can't wait for more ur Awesome

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