All Comments on 'Natalia and Her Wolf Ch. 06'

oh you tease lol love this chapter even though its too short. can't wait for more love your story and i love marie :-)

The start was very confusing and Eric being attacked yet again is getting a tad boring it is time she was back with her mate.

-_- is everything you say laced with negativity? I got this love. Thanks for the lovely advice though 😒

Thanks for the chapter. There are always many skirmishes before the penultimate battle. :)

I thought you wanted people to give their view on how they saw the chapter. Sorry if you only wanted butt kissing then I will remember that in future.

Willie

I'm sad!!!! Eric can't never catch a break!! Can't wait to see what's next!! Loving this story!!

You little ball of sunshine. I enjoy your not so subtle advice. Just let me know what I need to do...

Really enjoying the story, your writing is improving with every chapter. Hope you post a new one soon.

Please try and make them a little longer

:)

I do live on the sunshine coast in oz! lol Just keep writing the story the way YOU want to and don't let anything change how you see it play out.

Everyone will see it differently and you can't please everyone so don't try, just do it your way.

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ENJOYED IT.

Just read the re-write from 1-6 and can see improvement in each submission. You have a great storyline going with many possibilities. Don't rush too much and the story will be longer (yeah!!) and more fulfilling(double yeah!).

Overall you give enough detail to your story and still leaving me something to "fill in" on my own, typos are small and few between. Enjoyed the story. Please note: Some people have to gripe, because they do not have the courage or talent to try.

Does the alpha keep keeping screwed by his closest "allies"?

I like the twist in your story lets hope the get back to each other.

When is the next chapter coming out???? I am getting frantic here!!! You left with a cliff-hanger!!!!

First, great job on this series. Second, never let the opinions of other change the direction of your story. I loved the fact in the first version her father saw her graduate. This was a really great series, please finish. So many good series and stories on this site are never completed.

Ima wicked bitch but I started failing 2 classes and my mom was like oh fuck no MakaiLynn ... I'm back though (still failing) and ill have a new chapter soon

Can't wait for the next part

love your work but listen to the mom on the school! then post more and soon!

thanks for update :-) don't want you failing school but im glad there is more story to come

when is the new chapter coming out?! its driving me insane that i dont have anymore to read!

You used to post regularly,,once or twice a month,,,and now nothing since july???Feeling like we have been abandoned,lol,,,hope you come back to finish it soon,,,thanks

Stop playing with my emotions and upload ch.7!

I can"t decide whether they are incredibly brave or just crazy!

this is a wonderful story I can'twait for more.

Please let there be more!!