All Comments on 'Natalie 02: Casual date'

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Kiwi4everKiwi4everover 2 years ago

A good evening was had by both of them but she was in control fully and got what she wanted which was good for her

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
wonderful!

The story of Natalie really takes off in this second chapter. The romantic atmosphere and the relationship of Natalie with Jake is marvelous.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is a complex and contradictory universe you are creating! Sexy. Dystopian. Good stuff, but not always pleasant. I wish the two could’ve found more to respect and enjoy about each other than just brute sex. I’m a romantic.

—Grant

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All stores whose title starts with someone's first name take place in the same universe, (e.g. Jake, Jennifer, and the rest). I hope you enjoy :)

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