by Traumseele
A good evening was had by both of them but she was in control fully and got what she wanted which was good for her
The story of Natalie really takes off in this second chapter. The romantic atmosphere and the relationship of Natalie with Jake is marvelous.
This is a complex and contradictory universe you are creating! Sexy. Dystopian. Good stuff, but not always pleasant. I wish the two could’ve found more to respect and enjoy about each other than just brute sex. I’m a romantic.
—Grant