All Comments on 'Natalie'

by QueenPersephone

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
just ok

Just ok. Good writing but more girl on girl action needed.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 8 years ago

Mmmm, nice - veeery nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A beautiful, sensual first time

This is very hot, please share more about you and Natalie. I'm a lesbian and I like stories about 2 femmes :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Real?

Is this real? If so, wow, cool! If not, it's still a really great story. Also, are the characters in all of your stories based off of you, because they all are described as looking pretty much the same. I'm just curious. You are an amazing writer!

QueenPersephoneQueenPersephoneover 8 years agoAuthor
This is a true story :)

Yep, 'Natalie' is a 100% true story...my first lesbian experience. I hadn't even kissed a girl before, I had fantasised about it but she came on to me like this - and then...welllll...you read the story ;-)

Yes, all my protagonists are either me or based on me...I like to cast myself as having the sexual adventures I conjure up...why let someone else have all the fun!?

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