All Comments on 'Natalie'

Please keep this story up I like what you are doing.

Really liked your story. There is a very strong feeling of reality for me in this. Having lived in several apartment buildings--flats to you blokes--this sort of thing happened on occasion. Not often to me, but I heard about stories from others.

Keep it up, I would like to read others

GW!

YATHAIR!

I didn't read the page 2.

Having lived in apartments I know relationships like this do occassionally happen. Sometimes they develop into a full blown live in arrangement, and a future marriage is possible. On the other hand, having the abuser living in the same complex can make for some unpleasent, even gruesome scenes, and fatalities aren't unheard of.

I do hope this couple creates an excellent relationship though. My best wishes to them!

if whoever sent FF could write it would be nice to see what they come up with im sure i wouldnt get past the first sentence. i liked the build up and enjoyed the sex scene very much this is a good story and dont let anyone tell you otherwise. "jakk"