All Comments on 'Natalie'

if whoever sent FF could write it would be nice to see what they come up with im sure i wouldnt get past the first sentence. i liked the build up and enjoyed the sex scene very much this is a good story and dont let anyone tell you otherwise. "jakk"

Having lived in apartments I know relationships like this do occassionally happen. Sometimes they develop into a full blown live in arrangement, and a future marriage is possible. On the other hand, having the abuser living in the same complex can make for some unpleasent, even gruesome scenes, and fatalities aren't unheard of.

I do hope this couple creates an excellent relationship though. My best wishes to them!

GW!

YATHAIR!

I didn't read the page 2.

Really liked your story. There is a very strong feeling of reality for me in this. Having lived in several apartment buildings--flats to you blokes--this sort of thing happened on occasion. Not often to me, but I heard about stories from others.

Keep it up, I would like to read others

Please keep this story up I like what you are doing.