All Comments on 'Natantia'

what can I say. It was great and i enjoyed reading every word of it. But then again I am fromn the south and yes it is great.

Now THIS is the kind of stories we ladies like to read! The passion!! Bellisimo!

I missed getting to know the characters but it is a very sweet little story - a bit mushy, perhaps, but that's fine for an old romantic like myself.

Not much to the story but I did enjoy it.

I think you feel asleep and forgot to finish your story. They were about to go to a family dinner and admitting growing feelings and other "loose ends" and you have them fall sleep??????

I feel cheated for investing time into your story.

Like Anonymous, I would like to know where the rest of the story can be found.

Great story! Your character development was spot on as was the set-up. Great job!