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who wrote this a ten year old

This is my first attempt at writing a story, any feedback or criticism is welcomed. Will continue to write more such stories in near future.

I feel this is a decent first attempt. Of course I'm biased, because this features my favourite fetish, lesbian strap-on anal, with an emphasis on domination, conquest and possession. It also helped that it featured a top becoming a bottom, which I can't get enough of. And of course, it had one of my favourite women, The Black Widow, getting her big fat ass fucked.

It should be noted you did a good job in getting inside the characters heads to show what they were thinking, and referenced some of their past conquests. That always enhances the experience, IMO. As did the description of the sex, and the promise of more. God, I hope there's more.

Although there is definitely room for improvement. For one thing, there isn't much characterization. I still struggle with that, and sometimes it's fun to throw it out the window, but it definitely sells the experience. The story also feels very rushed. You don't have to describe the room in detail or anything, but it might help to set the scene a bit more. Also, just a single letter for a name? Wow, that feels lazy.

And there's probably more, but the best way to improve is to keep trying. Hope you do.

Thanks for the advice MTL. I am a huge fan of your work, the thing is characterization is something i struggled with while writing this story but will work on this part surely. I am planning on writing a part with other marvel female leads too, hopefully they will be a bit better.

Thanks for the comment though

So fucking hot. I love the idea of Natasha Romanoff being a submissive top. I read and reviewed "New Mistress" and really liked it; it took me a while to get to this, but I'm glad I did. Love how Natasha wore low-cut top and shorts, barely covering her ass, while going to meet Peper, and how she was checking out Pepper's ass while they walked into her office. That part alone made my dick jump up. I especially liked how Natasha wanted to fuck her after learning about Pepper talking about her that way, and decided to go to lunch with her with that intention, but Pepper successfully turned it around and fucked Natasha in the ass. Very sexy how Pepper licked Natasha's asshole first, and later made Natasha clean her cock. I'm glad she made her leave naked as well. My rock-hard dick was throbbing while I read this story. These parts were smoking hot: "Pepper: come on Nattie, accept it you're a bottom, pretending to be a top, but her heart and her butt needs a good old butt fucking.

and i can give it to you, cos that's what my heart desire the most Nattie, your busty cheeks against my soft thighs. imagine it how good it will feel after all these years to finally give in and embrace your true self. Nattie - the Fat Ass Bottom bitch. it will be our little secret Nattie, come on.

Natasha was shell shocked, this is what her heart desired, but can she really give up her title. She was still processing when Pepper decided to strip, her little yet perky breast were first to be seen, then she bent over to show her well-shaped ass and then she turned around to show her shaven pussy, she approached Natasha like a predator, something Natasha usually did with women. their lips matched, clearly Natasha was letting pepper take control, she started to fondle the black widow's tits, the she started to grab that widow booty.

Pepper; Strip for me Nattie

Natasha was in a euphoria; she couldn't believe this was happening to her. She wanted it. After years Natasha was going to be a butt bitch to a girl, an average girl without any powers. She was the Black Widow, a woman who has ass-fucked Thor once but here she was stripping like a cheap whore. She knew her end was near.

She was standing in just her underwear with her tits out in Tony and Pepper's living room and just as she was about to strip her last piece of clothing, pepper said,

P: Stop Nattie, let your mistress take over now pet.

Been called pet had some wild effect on Natasha, she was awe-struck just as pepper started kissing her. She quickly took control of the kiss and started to squeeze those big breasts. She started to feel her entire body and in a min it was clear black widow has lost the battle.

N: I can't do this Pep.

Natasha said as pepper started feeling her big butt

P: I know, first times are hard. "But don't worry, Nattie.. I'll make it really good for you. Now just say YES and we can begin

N: (whispers) Yes..

While that was all the consent Pepper needed, she gave Natasha's butt one last hard squeeze and then grabbed onto her panties and then started slowly pulling them to reveal the juiciest ass on the planet.

She did nothing as she was topped and Pepper shoved her face in between her cheeks.

The constant moans that escaped her lips, as she got the best rim job in quite some time. She had a room full of bitches, she had Thor and Banner but no one has treated her butt to such pleasure. She wanted this to last."

And

"N: Fuck me, fuck me Pep, fuck me Mistress. Use my asshole as you like you please, just let me cum mistress. Share me with Wanda later but now please drill my asshole and make me cum like a pet, like a butt slut, like a bitch. Please I beg you to fuck the top out of me. Fuck me pleaseeeeee. This feels so good.

Pepper was happy at this display of submission and decided to give her pet what she wanted. She started moving the dildo in and out of her ass fast and started to pinch the black widow's ass.

It seemed like in no time at all Natasha was experiencing an orgasm which was easily as hard, if not harder, than the time she had a threesome with Thor and Drax. She started to scream at the top of her lungs, thank god tony had soundproof glass in his house otherwise the entire world would know what was happening in the room.

Pepper couldn't believe how hard the cheeks were jiggling. The cheeks were just so big and the hole between them so tight, and Nattie was even slamming herself backwards, fucking her own ass like a true butt slut. In her mind Pepper felt happy as she had made sure that this bitch accepts her true destiny.

They both came twice in the process and the Black Widow was almost passed out, sensing her own condition, Pepper took the dildo out of Nattie's ass and saw the former top lying on her couch almost knocked out from being butt fucked.

P: Bitch spread your cheeks fast, I want to see that asshole. The hole that I own now.

Natasha whimpered and started spreading her cheeks for her owner. She had no strength, she was pretty sure Jarvis had taken countless photo and videos of this session.

P: Come here now and clean my cock.

This is something Natasha always made her bitches do, in fact she even made Thor suck a dick once. She even clicked a photo that she sent to Loki of his brother being a bitch, last she heard Loki had used that picture to butt fuck Thor in front of people of Asgard and the god of thunder is now submissive bitch in Asgard. But today she had similar fate written for her. She was now a cocksucker and she loved it. This humiliation had caused pleasure which she had never know in the history. Natasha Romanoff was now just a bitch."

Keep it up. I jerked off so hard to this.