All Comments on 'Nathalie's Makeover'

by Cagivagurl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hoping for More

I loved the story and would love to see another chapter. Hopefully if you continue it won't be a humiliation and cuckold thing as much as them both enjoying the little games together. The idea of dressing and "fooling" everyone has always intrigued me and I hope you continue with the story. I know you have ideas as to where you want it to go, just putting my two cents in.

diane92374diane92374over 4 years ago
Amazing story

I love Viv the wife. The storyline is wonderful. Coaxed into helping the wife complete an assignment for class, Nathan gets hooked. You have to read it to find out how it ends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
What are viv's real motives

Does viv really want to explore her lesbian side or is she setting all this up for a divorce? When yves came in he should have told him to leave or call the cops!!! I think viv has some inkling that nate was dressing up when she was gone and this is her way of blackmail ,divorce or both

As a bloke i enjoy the textures and feelings of the fabrics that makeup women's clothes but for me strapon only if that is her fantasy or watch it on porn channel, me I'm strickly into women some kinkyer than others

DianeRedfernDianeRedfernover 4 years ago
Wow! Duplicitous, Hot and Wet!

Viv RULES!!!

xoxo,

Di

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
One more chapter!

Where it turns out Viv arranged this seduction in order to complete her husband's feminization, and the two of them can not only enjoy each other M-F or F-F as she's wanted but also, together, enjoy Yves F-F-M or separately when he's in town! What bliss!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
H

if you do a second chapter make sure you put in there that viv admits to setting up nate

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another one bites the dust

Started off as a great story. Then like most, you turn him gay. Same story we've read over and over here.

Dressing and liking it does not make him gay all of a sudden. Most stories do that. Such a shame.

centralsquareguycentralsquareguyover 4 years ago
Great Story Cagivagurl!

I've been enjoying your longer stories, Candy and Tai, but this one is extra special and really HOT. I love it when cross-dressers get so caught up in the moment, so totally into being a woman, that they have sex with men even though they consider themselves straight.

They just can't help themselves...

Please give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
He's screwed!

Bet you that his wife knows or suspects that he's been dressing on the weekends and see up for Yves to come over, hoping for just what happened.

Even if she didn't she'll find out and it'll be all over. Wife is going to have him servicing men every weekend from now on, and not all of them orally.

Poor sod. He needs to grow a pair and ditch the wife.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 4 years ago
oh so hot

I couldn't stop reading, so sexy .. I would love to read more about Natalie's development .. please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lost me

When started flirting and setting him up i got pissed and will stop. Would have been a great husband wife fun story without her tricks and disrespect.

orzysorzysover 4 years ago
pissed me off

another story started well and then, manipulation, disrespect, guy suddenly turned gay from crossdressing. Can't stand it

LisaBrooksLisaBrooksover 4 years ago
Loved The Transformation

Viv was in a bind and asking her husband Nathan to let her give him a makeover as a cosmetic project is a dream come true! Nathan put up a good fight but Viv won the battles and eventually got him to want to dress in her clothes! I think Viv knew Nathan needed to be relaxed and comfortable with the makeover getting him to believe he would not be recognized! When she invited Yves over to dinner and didn't tell Nathan when he was in female mode Viv was making a point Yves wouldn't recognize Nathan but his twin sister Nathalie! It worked! However, Viv didn't know about Nathalie, in time after all those makeovers liking to dress in feminine clothes when left alone! It was arousing to read about Nathalie getting a surprised visit by Yves! Wine was the fluid of choice when trying to keep the ruse! But it ended up with kissing Yves then feeling Yves hard cock and ultimately pulling his hard penis out of his pants stroking it then giving a good blowjob for Nathalie's first time! Nathalie received Yves hot load of sticky gooey semen! Well done! I would love to live in that scenario!

Biboi54RBiboi54Rover 4 years ago
My Wife and her Sis

My wife and her dominant sister Kiki are transforming me into a bottom sissy slut and I love it. It started as an innocent threesome between us, but soon they were dressing me up and using strapons on me. They say they want to bring home men for me very soon. What should I do? The idea scares but excites me.

Renata

Suzi_sheffieldSuzi_sheffieldover 4 years ago
Beautiful Story

Really well told. I hope there's more like this. Magnificent.

robin48robin48over 4 years ago
Like alot

more details.more plot. Nice.

ArsEroticaArsEroticaabout 4 years ago
Why?

Why do every Crossdresser ends up with a Cock in his Face and likes it?????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Transformation is fun. Rape is not.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
pretty hot

this had to be a wife set up. but still hot, glad it is a fantasy. it would also be hot as a real story. almost every white boys dream. or should i say white boi?

BoytitsBoytitsover 3 years ago

I like it kind of reminds me of my first cock , could not believe I loved giving head!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Same as others why does it have to be spun into a gay scenario? Just leave it as fun between husband and wife. Vast majority of cross dressers aren’t gay far from it. Great storyline spoiled.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I like to crossdress but have no desire to be with a guy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

All your stories start great and then turns sour quickly, wife turns up bitch, readers end up frustrated instead of relaxing. May be a different version where wife isn't a bitch or CD isn't forced to be gay might be a good story for several readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story up until you spoilt it with having him fellate his boss. Not every CD is gay/bi, in fact the vast majority are straight. The wife started out enjoying herself and being an equal partner, then turned into a real bitch. Shame really.

TanniaLingTanniaLingover 2 years ago

Unlike others I don’t mind a little cock action. Kind of sexy. But it would be much better if it occurred naturally and not as an alcohol fueled assault. And the wife … she started being a great fun loving partner and then became a bitch. Disappointing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I agree with the earlier comments about how the character of the wife changed so dramatically. Its like she had carefully planned out a way to get him dressing so she could then trap him with a homosexual situation. The set up was severely obvious and I find it hard to understand how anyone who loves and cares for their partner could be THAT callous and self centered when you take into consideration HE was the one who stood up and married her as the one who got her pregnant had done a runner on her. THE FACT She calls her husband telling him she was having private phone calls with the guy she had so badly been flirting with is Strike one for evidence of either cheating out right or a Homosexual Set up. Strike two she tells her husband SHE has given her conspirator knowledge of the house key location so he can from that moment on have unfettered access to their home as the guy who had been so obviously interested in having sex with his wife.Strike three only a complete MORON would not be able to connect the dots of who this FAT PIG of a french guy was obviously communicating with his conspirator on his laptop as only this husbands obvious dismay could have been at that POINT so HUMOROUS - Sorry but if this Lead character can't see just how obviously he was set up by his cheating bitch of a wife and a CUNT of a SO Called Friend He seriously suffers from DADS Disease (Dumb As Dog Shit)

Anyone would imagine she would have more respect for his dignity especially with his/ their lively hood in the balance..what she did was paramount to marital suicide. If it were me, and my wife did that to me ALL sexy shit aside I would be moving out..I could not live with anyone who could plan something so evil and with one of my coworkers to boot.

Its important not to treat the reader as being too simple minded not to see things that should be Obvious to any person with a decent level of intellect.

I am going to try to read the next chapter but I'm so disappointed in this lead characters powers of observation I am worried I'm going to get pissed off with his complacency.

people who do what he is doing and are as careful as he was to put things back where they were are very observant of things around them and are LOOKING for anything out of the ordinary that might be amiss.

KeeperonKeeperonalmost 2 years ago

I agree with others that the twist in this is too harsh and not natural. Maybe having her dressed up with the changing women friends would have been a easier sell. But still enjoyed the read.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanalmost 2 years ago

divorce Viv as she is a bitch and your just exploring at your own speed. Yves is a predator

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