All Comments on 'Nat's Adventure's Ch. 01'

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JadestoyJadestoyalmost 7 years ago
Interesting

I actually liked it except for a few mistakes. Like calling Nat's sister Nat not Natalie. But what's the back story, how did she get her power? Please continue

JadestoyJadestoyalmost 7 years ago
Interesting

But confusing regarding Nat and her sister'site names. Needs a little work but I really enjoyed and hope you continue this

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