All Comments on 'Natty Silver Ch. 02'

this is really good, i really hope to see this continued :)

Hey all - Thanks for all of the comments! I have actually started publishing this series on Amazon for Kindle. The title is "The Regulator", by Noir Duvall.

A third part to this wonderful story.

Title of my comment says it all.

I really like both of these character's a lot. Hope you update soon though and with a longer chapter. This seems like the start of something really good.

Look foward to the next

I enjoyed reading this chapter 2 and its getting really interesting... but why so short?

loved this chapter but it would be awesome if you could make them longer, please update soon..........cant wait for more