All Comments on 'Natural Beauty Pt. 03'

by sarobah

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ThesilveredfoxThesilveredfoxover 5 years ago
The needle is stuck.

The constant harping on about the female only nudity really detracts from the underlying story and has for me become tedious.

myothername100myothername100about 3 years ago

I disagree with Thesilveredfox. To me, the cultural tourism is the hook of the story and it's important to explore every aspect of it. I think the author has been very careful to not repeat herself like many of these stories do, and every instance the nudity is brought up it's to reveal a new feeling it brings to the protagonist.

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