All Comments on 'Natural Consequences'

Another cuck shit has entered Lit.

Sometimes I think that every closet Transgender is here. -1

You captured the experience and emotions of a lot of us college cucks perfectly.

... certainly got me wet. Also a bit sorry for the previous commentator. Seems to hate cuck stores, but despite the title has to read them and complain. Get a life!

The protagonist is the wimpiest cuck ever. What is the point of writing this? Who is your target audience?

That was just... so intense. The whole buil up was exquisite and fuck it got me turned on. I loved it and I do want a part 2 thank you very much.

Not sure why people read cuckold stories who aren't into them, but whatever. Excellent job! It's definitely the extreme end of cuckolding, but theres nothing wrong with that. Would love to see a part 2 with how matthew and Emily's relationship evolves with daniel as their bull! Or even if matthew turns gay or sissy for Daniel too

Really enjoyed reading it. Please continue. Superb. 10/10.

Don't listen to the haters.

You really, REALLY delivered with this one. A cruel slow burner, just the I like it. You really know how to convey the insecurity of the protagonist and the primal fear of his situation.

Emily is a gorgeous innocent girl, similair to many crushes I had myself. Witnessing her getting corrupted by her darkest desires was simply mindblowing.

I really hope you'll continue writing, either a sequel or similair stories. I'd be thankful for everything.

Greetings.

Absolutely sent it out of the park, 10/10. Well done

did an incel write this?

It was fantastic please write more.

Loved the turn of events in this story. Please write a part 2!

What a fantastic story!

Great build up and an amazingly cruel ending.

Hoping for a sequel or anything like this

Best thing I have read on the site. Loved the buildup I would love to see a part 2 or you write more cuckold stuff.

This is the best story I've read as long as I can remember.

Would love a follow up where Matthew gets further humiliated by Emily and Dominic.

Don't listen to the negative comments on here, you're a really talented writer.

Idk, I liked the sexual aspect of this or whatever but fuck man. I really hated this,I can't explain why this one pisses me off so much but Jesus. The main character was just too much of a pussy and beta male to do anything??? I never wanna be in this dumbass position man or I'm just gonna end my life. I have deep hate for any situation like this, I get that its just fiction, but fuck all that noise

Holy shit this is good! Seeing Emily being corrupted by Dominic was so hot.

The moment she asks for a foursome is brilliantly written.

Don't worry about the negative comments - you can't please everybody.

I really hope you write another chapter!

When you're done with this story I would love for you to write something where the protagonist is friendzoned by his crush. It's a genre that's hardly been written about on this site and I think you would excel at it

Amazing mind fuck with top notch action

I was on the verge of tears most of the story. I know that it's supposed to be fucked up, but this was brutal.

As much As I like the sex and where things are going and how the buildup was going. Wow.... I really dislike the aspects of how he went through getting a date and working his way to having the girlfriend and she immediately gives in to another man. No hate but if this happened to me, the guy is gonna get an ass whooping and my girlfriend would be thrown out of the house and I'll never date or be with someone again. I'm still single which is good, I know how some dates and relationships go. Most of the ones I seen and heard goes up then falls down crumbling in the end.

God I love Dominic. He's like the best friend a cuck could ever have. Matthew is so lucky.

Excellent story, hot as fuck! The only gripe I have is the grammar/spelling here and there, just a bit more proofreading. Great pacing though, looking forward to seeing more of your work.

Cheers

Why he did smash their joint project model over Dominic's head, I'll never understand.

Nature itself will destroy everything you hold dear, and you are, in the end, powerless to prevent it. It does so to all of us with death. Cuckoldry is merely the desire to see that same callousness bear its teeth as nature makes life, too. This story understands the fact sex conquers all. Deep down, we're still animals.

Why? I get the reason why its even labeled as cuckold. But jeez christ, this dude is a wimp.

Sure some or most are, but there's so many different kinds of cuckolding. This is a forced cuckolding judging by how the girlfriend kept asking her boyfriend to allow her to get away with what she wants. So he's basically a beta sissy boy who can't even take it upon himself to even acknowledge consent and just sits back.

Also his friend having this big sized cock. Yeah sure, about most things you can get away with in fiction stories.

This shouldve been added as "forced cuckold"

Again every genre of fiction and what not has extra tags or labels.

Nonconsent cuckold

Consenting cuckold

And so on forth.

The second part of this fiction story is unnecessary and basically a cycle copy of this entire story number 1.

If your gonna write cuckold, make it more interesting than immediately just sex at every corner.

Some build up before cuckold even happens or hinting away for it to happen or what not.

I seen better ones but that doesn't mean this isn't bad, but could been improved upon in the second story of this. But nope just a copied of the first story.

this story fucking slaps. can't stop cumming to it. thank you.

Their should be a cruel girlfriend tag, awesome story

AMAZING STORY!!!! Super hot!!!!

This story of fucked up. I’m sorry. Cant get off from this cuz it literally hurts. If I were the boyfriend I would smash their skulls with a sledgehammer.

Yes its hot but this is cruel. I get excited when i read this because i thought the mc will grow up in part 2. I know he got no confidence but if you see your girl like that wont you feel your anger rising? Anger means you will do things without thinking which leads to hurting or accidentally killing him in the process. Im really looking for the part when the mc man up himself without relying on love from girls. And i hope his ex-bestfriend get sick or what kind of bad thing to happen to him. Bet the bestfriend is feeling insecure because the mc is the one getting the girls. Author pls do revenge for everyones wellbeing.

"As the girl chocked and gurgled" She was placing wedges under truck tires to keep in from rolling? I apologize for the sarcasm, but there's far too many sloppy errors to ignore. Hot story-line though. Please find a proofreader.

WTF why didn't MATTHEW just pick up a lamp and knock the fuck out of Dominic before his cock slide in to Emily's pussy to save her? Matthew deserves what happened to him, just because he as no balls, she would have left him in the future anyway without balls to defend her from him and his huge cock..

This isn't hot. See a therapist.

"Can I come in Matthew?" . Is he asking if he can cum in Matthew, or is he asking Matthew if he can enter his room? What a difference a comma can make. Writing, "Can I come in, Matthew?" would have kept my mind in the story. Hopefully an editor has been found for parts two and three of this hot theme. I'm looking forward to reading them.

i think the story could've gone better, like..the story needs to be satisfying but it gets a little too frustrating, the cuckold aspect needs to be a tease but it ends up being stressful and frustrating. its even more annoying that whatever dominic says is always framed as ''hes so innocent'', it'd be hotter if dominic was maquiavellous in some way and it would be hotter if the main character actually started getting hot and horny about the whole thing, but instead he just gets more and more sad and its just not sexy at all. he just kept whining and being forced into it, that turns me off completely, i was expecting him to be like''yes fuck my gf please'' but that never happened, no satisfaction there.

5 stars

Oh, I'm just thrilled to drop a comment here, highlighting how your perspective doesn't quite match mine. Clearly, it's completely unacceptable for us to have differing views. After all, everyone knows that only my take on the fetish is the epitome of sanity.

I'll also express my critique of the story and the fact that you compelled me to read the whole thing, which feels like a clear violation of my fundamental human rights. Can someone enlighten me on this supposed "common sense" notion of stopping? I'll just soldier on through this piece of fiction that clearly doesn't align with my tastes. Oh, what a tragedy it is that I can't seem to avert my eyes! Perhaps the true cuckolds are the troglodytes we've met who insist on delving into fictional narratives they despise. How utterly mortifying. Maybe they derive pleasure from getting riled up over non-existent things they dislike?

Instead of writing my own hyper realistic piece of fiction I will now demand that you write exactly how I want you to because I am a functioning member of society. My yet-to-be-written imaginary story, immune to critique as it doesn't exist, is undoubtedly superior, dick.

Putting the wrong name is extremely off putting and changes the dynamic of sex. It went from sex, to gay sex, to sex again all due to the wrong name in the wrong place. Speaking of which, when is Matt going to come out of the closet and admit he wants Dom's cock? And who fucks a girl, gets hard again during a foursome with two girls, and instead of finding another hole, they start jerking off? That didn't make a whole lot of sense. Maybe if she told him to fuck off or something, but on his own accord? That's how you get experience dummy. The verbal humiliation always makes me laugh. Some of the shit they say is so retarded it makes me laugh. Especially in the IR cuck stories. Always talking about fill me with your powerful black sperm. I'm like, bitch if his sperm is black, that's a whole different list of issues you need to worry about. Anyway, the last anon needs to lighten the fuck up. At least we're commenting on the story and not people's comments. I can't speak for most, but I pretty much skimmed this story to get to the "dark," ending that the description alleged. That was disappointing. I was assuming a suicide or homicide, or him fucking them over hard-core. No such luck though. Can't win them all, I guess.