All Comments on 'Natural Exposure Ch. 01'

Great story. I'd appreciate additional chapters.

Yes I want more...

YES, please continue.

Great build up, great imagery. Really like this, please keep going!

Would I like more?

Abso-bloody-lutely

Yes. More please! The shower scene was... well, I wish I'd been there watching.

It would be a shame to waste such a wonderful set-up!

Nice and easy though....

Wonderful story. Can't wait to read what happens next

Great start. More please.

Enticing me in for more...please???

That was absolutely brillant!! You MUST continue or I WILL find you, strip you and spank you! ;-)

YES! More, please!! I can hardly wait to read this to my girlfriends!

Great story

Don't stop now!

Of course we want more!!

Something this Primal, yet exotic and erotic has to live on to it's eventual demise.

This could be a great story of primal sex in the wilderness. Would hubby approve? Would hubby find out? Would hubby want to join in? So many possibilities.

More please :-)

Oh, my gosh, it's wonderful! Wow. I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Really quite amazing, I won't lie...I was disappointed it ended. You have a way of making your reader greedy! I want way more! What a stunning piece! That shower scene... mmmm mmmm good!

One word.

OUTSTANDING!!!!

MORE Please!