All Comments on 'Natural Inclinations Pt. 01'

For those so inclined, this first, well-written chapter has the potential for a wonderful tale. Thank you -

The Wonders of a Vivid Imagination!

Although being far from a naïve 18yo, this story makes me feel just that. Once ! accepted the pee drinking, I could see the bigger picture of the shift in mind control and evolving feminisation.

A great start, DeanaBard, or should it be Miss DeanaBard?!!!

Definite 5 Star!

Well, we know where this story is going to go. The psychological beatdown from Janice is going to screw up this guy's life big time. I hate stories that mess with little kids and I understand some reasoning why the author brought up how Janice grew up the way she did. It still hurts to find out that Janice's little brother has been so traumatized by their mother that he probably is a full blown sissy that still craves cocks. Janice is a well trained dominatrix that Peter does not stand a chance to be a man (at least he has a big cock that may help him a bit).

Hey thanks for the nice comments on my story..... loved it. Found yours so I am reading this series.... very interesting and sexy! Tks

Great start to a very promising story. Great psychological breaking