All Comments on 'Naughty Fiancée Ch. 01'

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Anonymousover 7 years ago

MORE!!!

The loyal gardeners really deserve a bonus after all her teasing.

They should be allowed to go all the way with Jenny, in any way they feel she deserve!

They should rescue her from Tyrone and get a fitting reward from her for doing so!

justabird over 7 years ago

Amazing!!

This was amazingly hot! Great pacing and sexy scenes. More please!

dragginlizard over 7 years ago

Redundant

While this was a great story, it could have been told in half the number of pages. The constant repetitive phrases made it boring to read and took away from the flow of the story.

CaptJRackham over 7 years agoAuthor

@dragginlizard

I'm currently re-editing the story to fix some issues that I've come across. I appreciate your input, thank you.

Anonymousabout 7 years ago

Main charcter

Jenny's Dimensions change several times

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My stories typically feature exhibitionism, cheating and risky scenarios. Such stories require a lot of build up for the plot and the characters. Therefore, my stories tend to lengthy. I appreciate all criticisms whether good or bad and I removed the option for anonymous co...

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