All Comments on 'Naughty Lingerie Show'

Terrific story. Loved it. Keep writing.

But it didn't bother me a bit! In fact, after the first half-page I found your use of English to be more of a turn on than a distraction. Don't let anyone change your style or edit it out. Yes, it might make things more proper, but it will lose your wonderful voice. If you write a sequel (if there was one) it would be most enjoyed.

All the right elements of a good story. The language was fine, particularly for Ylva. Keep writing. Thanks

Enda en god erotisk fortelling fra Sverge. Bra å sjå at du er fortsatt aktivt og skrive stimulerende literature.

Veldige bra Libertine! :-)

Hilsen fra Peter i Norge

A lovely evening of slow seduction and gloriously delicious sex