All Comments on 'Naughty New Neighbour Ch. 01'

You spoilt the story with poor spelling and grammar

Yeah, I agree, about the spelling and grammar. I know this isn't a contest for the best short story of the year for some literary guild, but when a story has so many faults that they become too distracting to enjoy the story then the story is worthless. I like the storyline, but please clean it up so I read it!

The story is great, I really liked the concept, but it has too many spelling and grammar errors to keep my interest. The word soar was used for the word sore, that is not good.

Yea-I noticed a couple but not enough to keep me from enjoying

Great story! Just a note sore is spelled sore, not soar! (no- I'm not an english teacher! ;) )

One must not ignore the most powerful element of your story and that is the raw lesbian sex. Lets see what happens next :)

WELL I DON'T CARE IF THE SPELLING HAD SOME MISTAKES

I SEE THE WE HAVE THE SAME OLD LOT OF MR PERFECT OR MRS. WHICH EVER. CAN'T YOU JUST READ AND ENJOY WITHOUT BEING CRITICAL. HOW SAD YOU ARE. IF YOU CAN DO BETTER WHY DON'T YOU. AS THEY SAY HIGHLIGHT NOT THE FAULTS IN OTHER LESS OTHER HIGHLIGHT THE FAULTS IN YOU.

Please continue this story.. it is making me wet just thinking of how it will continue..

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Loved it, please continue with this story.