Sort by:
  • 6 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
CAN'T EVEN SOME UP WITH AN IMPROVEMENT RECOMENDATION

??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Loved it!

Loved your fantasy. Cant wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
What was that supposed to do

What a complete waste of your time and mine. 4ae7

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Hot Hot Hot!

I love the way you write! Sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one!

RB

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Reading your story was great. You narrated really well. I just hope I'm fortunate enough to experience the same from my wife some day.

The story was a nice a nice turn on....

Looking forward to another story...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It's amazing that you wrote something that is supposed to affect the reader's specific mind & parts of their body, yet a section of my mind was near-constantly being used to remember the number & type of mistakes!

Reading it the way it was posted, it would've had ZERO effect on me whatsoever.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous