by CatRus
What a complete waste of your time and mine. 4ae7
I love the way you write! Sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one!
RB
Reading your story was great. You narrated really well. I just hope I'm fortunate enough to experience the same from my wife some day.
The story was a nice a nice turn on....
Looking forward to another story...
It's amazing that you wrote something that is supposed to affect the reader's specific mind & parts of their body, yet a section of my mind was near-constantly being used to remember the number & type of mistakes!
Reading it the way it was posted, it would've had ZERO effect on me whatsoever.