All Comments on 'Navy Wives-Erica'

There is obviously more to this story and I want to see it soon. You have done a very good introduction, it seems real. Thanks for the story.

He gave her the green light to have sex with Tre? Guess I missed that part.

Amazing that she was able to extrapolate from “He loved her, and that meant he had confidence and trust in her, and he was prepared to allow her to be friends with whoever she chose, male or female” and “Robert's fantasy and weakness, to have another man lust after his wife, while his wife does what she does to provoke that lust” that Robert was okay with her to actually have sex with someone else.<P>

Notice that this does NOT say his fantasy is to have other men screw his wife. Maybe Robert just likes the fact that other men admire his desirable wife. Maybe he likes the extra ramped up sex that he gets after she sees that admiration. And sometimes a fantasy should just stay as a fantasy – and never become real. Robert says they should invite Tre - his wife’s friend, personal trainer and person that will help her with school – over more often. So far that’s all he has said.<P>

But in her mind she hears much more. It’s okay to have sex with Tre. But, of course, she already has, hasn’t she? And without Robert’s prior approval. Because this is really all about Erica: “Then there was the fact that she wasn't necessarily going about this to fulfill his fantasy, but to fulfill her own longings. It just so happened that Robert's fantasy played into her means to an end.” It is just serendipitous that Robert has this fantasy but she is going to do this anyway. <P>

“Although Robert wasn't the jealous kind, and always gave Erica the benefit of the doubt, he wasn't stupid.” I hope not because with or without his approval Erica is about to embark on an affair with Tre. And before it is all over I am guessing she is going to make it 3 for 3 amongst the sisters by have Tre’s baby. It will be interesting to see Robert’s reaction.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

For those that leave comments critical of stories like this my question is....Why did you read it in the first place? You knew from the title that it wasn't about a faithful wife and the husband was likely going to be a cuckold.

This is one of the better stories of this genre I have read in quite awhile. I'm sure you have more to offer and the story isn't nearly ended.

I'm tired of these people writing comments about how they want authors to write the way they want the story to go. Get lost! Stop moralizing like you are going to bring some sort of enlightenment to the authors!

I like this story and thre build up just the way it is. A lovely wife, a devoted husband and a hung friend who is enticing enough to bring excitement into their life.

My only question is that Robert didn't detect the taste of cum on his wife's lips when he kissed her. I would suspect if the load was large and thick, there would be some remaining in her mouth or the aroma should have been obvious. Perhaps he did and he is simply remaing quiet to allow the relationship to develop further before he comments. Maybe then he can simply ask her to open her mouth so he can see the sticky strands before he kisses her.

I agree with a previous comment that the readers knew beforehand that this story is about interracial sex and knowing that Robert is white that Erica will have sex with a nother man who is not her husband. The author does a good job with the story regardless of the direction the readers wish the sory would take

This is a very well written story. The way the relationship between Erica and Tre develops slowly makes it extremely believable and natural. I very much enjoyed it. Thank you for submitting it here and I look forward to the next installment.

one of the better ones on here lately , well done and very true sounding

and yes we all know she will see him more and more now

so real it had me really turned , to find a really nice hunk like Tre would be awesum , i would have been on my knees also

open marriages are based on good communication and trust. can't really see it in this one. so....

This was really a enjoyable story and not only well written but well thought out. Thanks for sharing.

This was a well written interracial story definitely surprised me.

I really liked this. If you follow up, it might be interesting to hear more of Robert's thoughts in Part 2. I think leaving his thoughts somewhat mysterious worked for Part 1, so the reader is uncertain how far he wants things to go. Not knowing helps the suspense build. But I think you have to let us know in Part 2!

First story of yours that I've read and I enjoyed it immensely. That it had two of my favorite elements, the older white wife/younger black man pairing, and a great blowjob probably had a lot to do with that. Great story, thanks for writing it.

Blaine

I hope that there is more comming. This was not a complete story. It was more like a never ending soap opera. Who is the character nmed Will? Did you read this over before you submitted it? Otherwise it a nice piece of work. Your writing is good. The

pace is great. I'm looking forward to more. I refrained from voting because I'd rather vote on a completed work.

Wow! Brilliant opener to this story. I've now got to investigate the rest of it. It was recommended to me by a contributor on 'CuckoldPlace.com' as a good example of a cuckold tale. He wasn't wrong!

You have put together a very classy cheating wife story. Good work on presenting and describing these characters. The build up was excellent. I enjoyed her sucking Tre off on their first serious sexual encounter. Her husband seems overly casual about the philandering, but I look forward to knowing more about him in later chapters.

You have a great way with words.

I just desire to congratulate with the author for this story, which is truly well written and also loved the unfolding events!!!

Loved all the psychological characterization of all the personages, Erica, Robert and Trevor.

Absolutely liked how Trevor scores and seduces Erica!

Loved some disruptive details the author added to characterize the personages....for example Erica racist parents disapproval and misjudgment of black people which collide with Fate events that are her older sister marriage with a black guy, her elder sister black man dating, and most of all Robert disability to get his wife pregnant!

All these details alligned with Erica conquest and seduction operated by Trevor makes this wonderful story a literary milestone against Racism and Black Race Discrimination!!!

Amen

Falling is more exciting then where you land. You are doing an excellent job of ensnaring us all in her journey.