All Comments on 'Nay'

Nay is an angel, not an angle!

I loved the story though.

.. but as per the previous comment some work required on simple spelling errors. Having said that though it was nicely told. Thanks.

Bowling Green! Too early in the story to make a mistake like that!

Maybe there were a few ooops in there but they were easy to overlook by reading on into the story as it was a easy story to get into and made you want to look on into the next line of the story itself.~ Got a "5" from me.!^** Can't wait for more from you.!

The story line is compelling. The spelling errors are a nuisance.

I see that there are a lot more of your output on LIT so I am looking forward to reading a lot of them.

Thank you for sharing with us.

But you need an editor. Don't give up. Keep on writing.

Loved the story

Piss on all the naysayers.

Fantastic! Hated for it to end.

Shit on the naysayers. We don't come here for a grammar lesson.

sad.

Keep them coming, another fine job.

you treeated her well, very respectsful she was a lucky girl and no wonder she allowed you to have her

Excellent damsel in distress story. More chapters are warrented. Teach her, love her, but we know he's going to take her back to her mountain top. Maybe even build that hunting lodge resort. Seems that grams and pop owned a lot more land than Nay knew.

if you haven't taken up professional writing yet, you should. Hard to believe that you aren't already a professional.