by onetoughacttofollow
Dam Can’t anyone write a dam story more then One Page? How can you get into a Story then it End. No more reading for me. Literotic you must have more then one page? How can anyone leave a Vote?
Started in third person , then 1st person and then again 3rd person. I lost the attention.
****Reads like the start of a very sexy series. Looking forward to future submissions. Thanks for sharing.