All Comments on 'Neal and Tara Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dam Can’t anyone write a dam story more then One Page? How can you get into a Story then it End. No more reading for me. Literotic you must have more then one page? How can anyone leave a Vote?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love it, only flaw is that other chapter i have to wait cor it

JKL123JKL123over 2 years ago

Looking forward to a continuation of this.

DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

Neal has to fill Tara's cunt with his cum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Started in third person , then 1st person and then again 3rd person. I lost the attention.

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

****Reads like the start of a very sexy series. Looking forward to future submissions. Thanks for sharing.

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