All Comments on 'Neat N' Naked 06: Felicity'

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Ravey19Ravey19over 3 years ago
Ended Too Soon

Thought there would be more to it as she was obviously being moved by him more than any other client. There were some excellent passages only marred by careless editing, etc. Then it ended too quickly.

On the whole a good effort.

WickedTongueGameWickedTongueGame3 months ago

You are a great writer. You obviously hsve a lot of life experience. It’s erotic and romantic..and I came three times while reading. Hmm, and I’m still hard.

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