All Comments on ''Neath Western Skies, Ma!'

An old underground comic -- I think it was by Ralph Reese -- had a grizzled flyblown prospector hook up with a MILF whore ending with: "Son?" "Ma?" and saloon bystanders asking, "Why him?". That long-remembered ending drove this whole story, which I wrote in 2 spurts about 8 months apart. I think I put enough snark into it. The sister and sisters bits are pure fiction, uh huh; the settings are all real. The people are all based on somebody. That's life.

I like it that Jack's sister Flora "impaled herself deeply on his throbbing cunt-splitter in one smooth lunge." It's so cool when a sister thinks of her big brother's big fat penis as a "cunt-splitter"--an instrument to split her sisterly cunt and send her into seventh heaven. And Flora sure appreciates Jack's "big wet loads"--all that glorious semen filling up her slit from his heavy hanging brotherly balls. Best is that Jack finally gets to blow a big wet load up his own ma's vagina. A sister's slit is sweet, but nothing beats a mother's warm wet ever-loving twat.

I must admit this isn't what I expected, but it is a fast paced, fun filled little tale and a very different story from this site's usual fare. I see you have written a lot of others so I'll have to check some of them out. Thanks.

I gotta give this a five for originality. Sorry it can't be a 10.

Exceptional quality writing. You really have a mastery of words. I suspect you have tried writing beyond erotica as well. I would love to read those works of yours too.

What "Outstanding" said goes for me, too.

I accidentally hit the 4 stars when I intended to hit the 5 stars!! I'm really sorry! This story was funny and so well written with a terrific command of the English language. I can hardly wait to read all of this writer's stories. Also, Literotica stopped allowing me to post under my name after I've been doing it for over a year since I discovered this site and registered. I've asked for help but Literotica hasn't responded. If anyone can help me, I'm Samantha at Samantha_123@hushmail.com. Thanks.

I liked this story; light and old West mentality. Five stars.

I USE A TEXT READER AND SPENT WAY TOO MUCH TIME TRYING TO GET IT TO PRONOUNCE SOMETHING IT CAN'T EVEN THO TEXTALOUD IS THE BEST.

I guess it was supposed to be funny? Not all that sexy. I'll look for something a little more serious. Any suggestions?

I've read your stories and always found something different in each of them. Definitely not your standard Literotica story. It isn't the kind of story I'd recommend, but I'm glad to have read it.

I asked for a light-hearted story and thought I got trolled when I got to the part where Jack was running away. =)

Here's a 5 for something different.

Great little story. Always loved westerns. Recognized all of the wonderful places you mentioned and pursued with wonderful characters.

What I said.

Very different but very good