All Comments on 'Neck'

good job keep writing

Nice start, leves a lot of room for expantion.

I loved the story! I could picture it in my mind easily and could imagine me in it. I'll definitely read more of your work.

the images you are able to provoke are

sensationally chilling and erotic. the

trust and love and lust are put together

very well. i especially enjoy the part where

she cums with her heel--- (but she may be punished

for that later???). good job!

Your amazing Lassus, I couldnt wait until I got home, and now thank you, Im drenched.

susie <3