All Comments on 'Necromancer Chronicles Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great

Hope could try to fix the relationship with Professor Mendez by helping him in the morgue.

bearsladybearsladyabout 9 years ago

I'm liking the fact they're learning more of their magic and what they can do. Nice ramp up of the suspense

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
it was a good story in first 3 chapters bt thn turn into a sibling story.where the girl is brain and boy is slut toy..

Leaving this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
enjoying the sibling development

Really enjoying the parallels between the siblings and their parents. On a different note, thought the characters took the revelation that humans have magic rather in stride. I would have thought there'd be some more freaking out. Also, it seems strange that no human accidentally learned of magic and broke the enchantment, thus revealing that humans have magic, in the fifteen thousand years since this was all set up.

However, the story is otherwise very nice, with interesting histories and well constructed magic systems. The characters are also a joy. Big thanks to the author!

KJay15KJay15about 3 years ago
Bit stupid

A 22 year old is taking charge while her mother, the ancient half angel is okay just sitting back listening and letting people try and kill her kids, whatever you say bub

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