All Comments on 'Need'

by Savage Submission

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lilsubalexlilsubalexover 18 years ago
Intense!

Wow! As I was reading, I found my heartbeating faster and my breathing shallow & panting ... just amazing! Maybe it is where I am mentally & emotionally myself just now, but I was incredibly swept along and involved.

After I read and voted, I debated sending it to my Master. He always wants to know when something I read touches me, but I have to say that this was so intense, I was a little afraid to do so. But, I was so struck and taken by your story - I felt compelled to do so.

That has never been my reaction to a story heretofore and I wanted you to know the depth of reaction your words brought forth.

Thanks!

Alex

Spankn_WillSpankn_Willover 18 years ago
Stunning...

My mind can't come up with any other words right now. It was - ahem - *hard* to get all the way through, and I have to run along now and let this 'perc' in my mind.

Very well done!

Spankn_Will

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Bravo!

SS,

This submissive is dripping wet and now more than ever needing to feel her Master's use. ~p

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
too rough

I guess you have to like pain to like this story. It was much to rough for my tastes.

Savage SubmissionSavage Submissionover 18 years agoAuthor
Thank you...

Thank you for your comments "Anonymous". Pain is not for everyone and I more than appreciate that others do not always share my interests. There are many stories that I come across that are not exactly "my cup of tea" though I generally refrain from voting on them. I have no business voting down a story whose subject is something I don't like, or am not interested in. (ie: beastiality). In the future I'd welcome any comments you'd like to send along to my e-mail. Thanks so much! -Savage Submission

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Good Story!!

Hope there will be more submissions from this writer. I enjoyed that this story was about a loving couple who knows what the other needs. I really enjoyed this story!

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayover 18 years ago
Amazing!!...

amazingly well written and directed, i was there with each stroke of the crop and pull of the clamps and although it did make me very lonely and missing my adoring Master,myself...i do appreciate your pain,love and needs. i've never quite been played that hard to the point of blood but, i know the joy and pleasure of giving it all to your Dom. Thank you for reminding me its time to slow down and focus some thru your writing...the focus is what i felt your mind being directed to and my gawd that is a wonderful feeling. i'm with you sister and hope you do continue to write from the heart. Loved it. a fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Goodness!

Wow. That was pretty hardcore. Perhaps a little too much pain for me, but I loved the way you portrayed the guy. His guttural remarks to her got me.....excited. Good writing!

badkitty1986badkitty1986about 16 years ago
more please

More pretty please? I loved it. Though it made me miss my owner very much.

HisLilGirlHisLilGirlalmost 15 years ago
Oooh very nice...

I can't believe this is your only story!! Great writing, GREAT attention to every single little detail. You captured the emotions and feelings so well, it made me want to be right there where she was, especially when he grabbed her face and made her look in his eyes! *shiver* Good job, and write more stories, PLEASE!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Love the attitude

A little rough for me, but oh, if my man treated me to that kind of true sexual discipline more often. I know exactly the kind of static she had in her head, and a good rough fuck is the best way to get rid of it.

Angelic_ImpAngelic_Impalmost 11 years ago
Breathtaking!

I truly enjoyed your story. I love that they are everyday people...a mother with a mini van! Very well written. Thank you!

Anonymous
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