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Really nice style. Very easy to read. Nice job.

Feel like she got the raw end of deal. She learnt to please him but not the other wat around...

Thank you for the effort to entertain and was a good start but not one to leave it there.

I think this was a great story, but I feel like it was too short Becuase Lucy learned how to please Avery but Avery didn’t please her. And I just feel like I want more of the story, I just love the idea of this story

Avery made Lucy a woman, now he has to change her name to MOMMY...

That's not romance.

You wrote it like a textbook example for:

Abuse of Power,

because it is.

He used his position of power and her innocence from her upbringing.

Apart from the Homework help, he didn't do anything FOR her.

She doesn't know better or anything other than to please him. She's basically a servant to him, not girlfriend or wife, servant for his lust and against his loneliness he shamelessly uses her.

You have to rethink what Romance is, this ain't it.