All Comments on 'Needed'

Having read Futa House previously, this story is just as good. How about another chapter (or two) to see where Ava and Kat take their 'friendship"?

I need part 2

Thumbs up

I cannot wait to hear of the remaining Gurls in the house and their exploits with the Doll!

Part 2 and more soon Please.

Best story I’ve read in months. More please!

This was fantastic. Many more chapters are definitely "Needed!" ;D

That was so insanely hot.

Seriously loved it

Seriously best story I have read after a long time. Definitely deserves more chapters. Looking forward it. Cheers

Great story definitely deserves a series. Potentially bring the mom back to the house to relive her doll days alongside her daughter.

Loved every word. Your doll concept is brilliant and I am surprised it wasn’t something brought up before considering most futas always seem hot for a guy to fuck. Five stars and I hope you continue this story. Incredible for a first story, actually for any number story.

I hope you make this into a seriessss!! I absolutely loved it!! I'd love to be a Doll too 🤤

This story has so much potential would be a shame I'd you didn't continue it further.

Very good work! That was wonderful homage to "Futa House" without being too directly copied. The fact that you had it play into the same universe, where the reader would be aware of the 'other houses' and therefore how/why the system works is a good choice. The interplay of relationships between lesbian & hetero (at least for story purposes) within a blossoming college lesbian romance, with a twist- offers lots of potential. I would love to read, and hope you intend on writing, follow-up chapters in this series. Once again Excellent Job!

-Tysvm 😘

Very good work!

I love Xarth's stories a lot, but I couldn't really enjoy his Futa house, due to the main character being male. Thank you very much for writing this story!

I am very much looking forward to your future work :)

This was perfect, hope you continue this story.

I love this story (it doesn't help that I'd also kill to be in Ava's position) Very good in the erotica portions of course but also in the character/relationship development. And I like that it does a better job handling consent than many works on this site do, especially those that involve futanari.

If you are inspired to make continuations of Needed, I'm sure I'd enjoy them just as much. :)

Pretty good, can’t wait to see another chapter

I love this story. I will wait for chapter 2

Nice story. I hope there's more.

I can’t wait for Eva’s cute little ass to used. Very sexy story, hope to see more…

Hello readers! I thank you all so much for the support of this story, but I would like to direct you to a re-written version of Ava's events. As of me writing this comment, a new version of Needed is pending to be published, called Venus. After publishing Needed, I found that I was not happy with the quality of the work, and figured that I could do better. The story in general remains very similar, but specific elements have been changed, most dramatically in the elements of the story before Ava shows up at the house. I have also altered the ending a bit, to better set myself up to continue this story in future parts, as I did not originally have any intention to do so with Needed.

As I intended Needed to be a standalone story, with no further chapters, I was incentivized to wrap up Ava and Kat's relationship issues in an abrupt form, so I could end the story with a 'and they lived happily ever after' vibe. Since I am not directly planning to continue Ava's journey, I have decided to write it out at my own pace, and leave things more open-ended for progression in future installments.

As such, any future chapters of Ava's journey will be written under the Venus series, not Needed.

I hope you understand my need for perfectionism!

Many thanks for the initial posting of this story and for the intended posting of “Venus” as a serial, I understand when someone isn’t happy with something they’ve created, but in all fairness there wasn’t a huge amount wrong with this story. Possibly the overly depressing start and the intermittent use of the word “whore” could be changed in an updated version, but I’d be wary of “throwing the baby out with the bath water” and changing too much, thus losing the charm and impact of the original, I’d also have recommended writing follow up chapters, but it seems you have all of this in hand, please keep the chapter length above 3 Lit pages though, anything shorter becomes frustrating for a reader waiting on new postings.

Looking forward to reading Venus when it’s posted. Cheers Ppfzz. 5⭐️

A truly outstanding work of erotica. The sexual scenes were so well done I couldn't decide whether to read through them quickly or slowly so, ........ I did both! Thank you, Chiisii

A absolutely fantastic story one of the best i have read

One very minor nitpick; Ava didn't seem to be very surprised to learn about futas. A wide-eyed "What the fu..." would have worked. I guess she could have already known about them? But as I said, a VERY minor nit.

Would love to see more!!!

Nice story with a good build up and storyline.

Two points caused lower voting.

First, futas are supposed to have both male a nd female organs. This story is a bout shemales.

Second, why the futas aren't engaged in sex with each other and why they didn't perform anal sex with Ava.

Still enjoyed the story.