All Comments on 'Needful Ch. 06'

Really: wow! Very hot, intense scene. I'm not usually a fan of rough sex, but the way you described how it felt for them made it damn enjoyable!

I'm giving you a hundred, but only because the 75 is too low. Really would prefer a 90, but that's likely as I was hoping for a little bit longer chapter after going without posting so long. Could maybe have used a little more plot tossed in, but then I may have missed a point of significance in what you did say (I really should refresh on the previous posts...).

Good chapter, man!

khyranleander

you a good writer,write more stories.let the women tell him their feeling while been fuck.

now when are we going to see mom take on her son's friends, like she mentioned in the first chapter?

I just read all your stories and am waiting for more. Hopefully your next one will be a little sooner as this story has developed over nearly 2 years.

a "hot" story usually goes downhill, and fast too, when it (the author) starts having its main characters fucking around endless partners,,,, like that energized bunny that just keeps "going, going, and going"!

eroticism (and surely "romance") --- contrary to popular myths/beliefs --- has to do with EXCLUSIVITY: it is the sex of two people who, for whatever reason, THINK or KNOW they have taken their acts to depths they believe NO OTHER humans have been able to and the sex act betwen them is used merely as a vehicle, if your will, to transport THEM AND ONLY THEM to that infinitely far-away, special dimension.

but when you start having a roomful of people, at one time, or in serial frames, having sex --- all sweating, grunting, with spit, semen, and other excrement flying around, the specialness, the eroticism, the taboo, and other the other features lose out to pure skin rubbing, common and fake animal grunts and gyrations, ALL soon to be so easily forgotten that the characters must again set up such ritual sessions again and again, in larger or more crude forms, otherwise, the participants feel like there's something lacking,,, which IS the case: there's nothing to start with, in such superficial skin-rubbing sexual rituals,

as opposed to, again, the special/erotic "dance" of two partner, each alone, with toal clarity and focus, taking the other to hights both believe they and only they will ever reach! lol

This was a great look at the dark side of sex. Passion, when truly unleashed, can become violent. It takes care to keep that under control.

Nookiehunter

Excellent message in your story on how to treat a woman. I wish I had read this as a teenager. You're a good storyteller, I hope there are more chapters coming.

Extremely imaginative and very well written. It's so nice to see someone who can use correct verbiage and punctuation in a story. Unfortunately, that doesn't seem to happen very often. You done good! 😁

After reading all of this series, (which was excellent by the way) the only thing I would have loved to have seen is a resolution to the story. Great story and great story telling. And I REALLY enjoyed the respect shown toward the women. The vast majority of stories I read here doesn't do that.