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by JamesMiehoff

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chytownchytownabout 4 years ago
Another Cause For Impotence***

What a ball breaker. Thanks for the read!

ju8streadingju8streadingabout 4 years ago

how could they not tell by each others voices?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
To answer your question ju8streading

The main character only spoke 2 sentences, and one word.

(How much for services ) in a growl, different tone pitch there.

(Ohh), anyone and almost Avery one at least says that receiving a bj.

(Offering to give a ride back), realistically speaking Someone like her that would probably hear that question quit a few times. Just want to finish to either get to the next or is this case get home. Also realistically speaking in this story it doesn’t sound like she spends a lot of time with her father. Probably does what she just did to him.

Keep it up JamesMiehoff, nice short read.

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