by Mister_X_TheStoryteller
dear author š
this story should be tagged under
bdsm and not romance for gods sake
do u have any idea about romance ?
do u ever got to spend a n8 with a woman?
in the kitchen scene
he licks her rectum and her pussy gets wet ?????
no kissing ,no foreplay
how can she get her pussy wet from analingus only ?
thats not how female arousal works ?
you are gud with words
so why are u so bad at expessing feeling and emotions in ur stories
both the characters are low on emotional iq ,no expression of love
also he wants a poly relationship with other woman ? u call this romance ?