All Comments on 'Black Invasions Ch. 01'

Zilla this story is unbelievable and I loved it. You are really great at writing stuff like this and I hope that you keep writing for a very VERY long time. Gotta love it babe.

I'm a white woman who loves to be fucked by black men with big cocks, just like in this story, so I found the story to be interesting and hot. What was distracting was the poor spelling. You need to find a proof reader to go over your stories before you submit them. I also liked the fact that there was no anal sex in this story. I'd like to see a follow-up story in which they fuck again and this time she is really hot for him and enjoys it to the max! Keep writing!

have had fantasies of being taken by a black man

It's nice to read a good story about some white bitch being punished. Can't wait to read more.

i liked this story. good job.

i dont know, maybe im crazy but i was extremely turned on by this story... while i dont condone true rape i think that deep down inside atleast 90% of women have had a fantasy about being dominated in one form or another. I would have loved to read about some anal action... please continue with this genre, maybe expanding on this story... xoxo

i dont know, maybe im crazy but i was extremely turned on by this story... while i dont condone true rape i think that deep down inside atleast 90% of women have had a fantasy about being dominated in one form or another. I would have loved to read about some anal action... please continue with this genre, maybe expanding on this story... xoxo

I enjoyed reading this story very much, keep up the good work Zilla....

Grammatical and spelling errors really detracted from the story - invest in a proofreader.

With all the errors in spelling and grammar it was hard to get a feel for the story please proofread..

I'm a woman raised in India and black men always have scared me, but I found the story very arousing. I often wonder when black men look at me, what it would be like to be made to submit to them. Love, Mangala

I am a black woman, but found this arousing. I don't think the race came into it, I just loved the power and confidence he showed.

I'd so love to be dominated by a strong black man.. I'm a white woman and I've never been with a black guy before but your stories make me want to try it ;) in all 3 holes

Loved every bit of it. Good job!

Loved every word. You have talent.

Hi Zilla - will there be a second part to this kinky little tale ? - maybe this time you could send this arrogant black to a fit blonde married mother's home - he repeatedly rapes her & easily makes her pregnant, telling her she'd better keep the baby he knows he has raped into her tight white married flat belly - or he will cum back & "play" with her daughters. I would love it to be me as his next victim !!!.

Thank you - the story made my very tight shaved snatch very wet

Keep up the great story writing

Sarah Leather, London England (fit, attractive, toned 32yo blonde married mum with two ultra cute blonde daughters)

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

Great job, Blackzilla. Keep them coming.

I would give anything to be her!! Love let black guy rape me and leave my knocked up !!

Hi Zilla - will there be a second part to this kinky little tale ? - maybe this time you could send this arrogant black to a fit blonde married mother's home - he repeatedly rapes her & easily makes her pregnant, telling her she'd better keep the baby he knows he has raped into her tight white married flat belly - or he will cum back & his big thick black cock will "play" with her daughters. I would love it to be me as his next victim !!!.

Thank you - the story made my very tight shaved snatch very wet

Keep up the great story writing

Sarah Leather, London England (fit, attractive, toned 32yo leather wearing blonde married mum with two ultra cute blonde daughters)

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

I enjoyed the story.. Until the senseless confession about your intention and personal preferences.. It's not wise to include personal issues in your writing.. It's unnecessary, and gives less validity to your work.

I read here, as well as many other sites, to find writers who have the abilities of transferring ideas from themselves to the reader, making it exciting, pleasurable,erotic, and done with care and professionalism.

Going to the extent of professing personal traits is bordering on insulting us as readers. Please don't do this again!

So many people who try to write are just narrating.

It's like watching cheap porn, with a bad actress saying "yeah stick your big black dick in my tight pink pussy". You just feel like telling them "yes we see whats happening, now can you try acting".

I couldn’t get in the mood, WTHECKKKK is up with ALL the spelling and grammatical errors. Zilla, did you graduate middle-school? Because I know you didn’t graduate highschool. No way would you have gotten through those 4 year writing papers the way you wrote THIS.

I loved your story. It had me wishing I was the girl in the story.

I know it's just a story but why punish a white girl who hasn't done anything. At least make it where she offended or degraded the guy on purpose so he had to make her pay.

He should have cum in her pussy instead and left her knocked up with a mixed race bastard.

Very juvenile make writing. Sorry, you can't do this "aimed his cock and rammed all ten inches of his black tool deep into her cunt." Doesn't work.

Could hashes been great, undated it was just a list of stuff he did to her.

Sequel please, use my wife

Loved it.