by thefrustratedsoldier
I thought that this was a very good first attempt. I little rough but not enough to take away from the story. I would enjoy reading more about their adventures, especially if Arianna keeps making him her bitch behind Mel's back. It would be interesting to see how he keeps the fact that he is wearing panties from being discovered or tries to explain the nail scratches down his back. Perhaps he must wear a remote control butt plug to stay loose for Arianna and she turns it on and off whenever he and Mel are together.
Good first effort. Maybe break up those longer paragraphs. And you don’t need every story to be DD’s and giant cocks.