All Comments on 'Neighbor Fantasy Ch. 01'

Very hot. Looking forward to chapter two!

Thanks

Good start to a multiple chapter story. Nothing hotter than a horny married neighbor in a string bikini and an alcohol buzz. Brad is in for a wild night of sex. 5 Stars.

Having set the scene as night, I can't figure out why Mrs Roberts was sunbathing. Did they live above the Arctic Circle?

Brad is 22 I take it. Fourth year of college. A sexy masculine, muscular young man. A good swimmer. Any chest hair for Mrs, Roberts to admire? Any touching or caressing while her breasts are in contact with his chest?

I enjoyed your story - both Chapter 1 & 2. Hopefully, Brad will find other older women to fuck, as he continues to enjoy Mrs. Roberts mature sexy body.

Thanks for sharing.

Too descriptive and some wrong words.

Brad stepped out from the bathroom, drying lightly his hair with the towel in his hand.

Brad stepped out from the bathroom, drying his hair with a towel. He's not going to use his feet.

Not particularly believable either.

Wow - What a great daydream!

I‘m sure I’ll have many a good night dream about this one!!!

enjoyed your story, keep them coming my friend.

This was a great start. Can’t wait to read more!