All Comments on 'Neighbor Girl Ch. 03'

I liked the first two chapters.

This one.... Not so much.

Not fun. Hurtful. Manipulative. Even mean at points.

This Chapter had character every good story needs depth and writing like this beautiful piece hope u keep story going.

....When art imitates life? Not the 'happy ever after' maneuvering I was expecting but it's your fantasy not mine. I just have a problem with manipulation on any scale and both Suzy and Victoria are obviously practitioners. I know that's life! (That I come to Literotica to escape!) Still I am enjoying the story and look forward to what your conniving mind will produce in the next chapter.

As always keep writing!

Cheers!

Sage

Vicky is a botch.