All Comments on 'Neighborhood Milf'

"She through her head back and let out a soft moan..."- it's threw.

Wow. Lots of comments!

Maybe you could lay off mentioning your cock size so much; like okay, okay, it's seven inches. I don't care. I doubt Julie cared either.

Had a steady thing with married woman. She once let it slip that her hubby was hung like a horse. Initially, I was a bit bothered, but it sure didn't bother her; we fucked like rabbits for years after that. If big cocks were so important, why was she with average sized me?

And, oh yeah, the myth about big cocks destroying pussy is bullshit! A women's pussy is amazing, and very adaptable!

fucking the town bicycle/cum dumpster. Yawn.

Outstanding

Needs cheating tag. She's married and fucking around on her husband.

Divorced or widowed moms are better. That way there's no downside. Everyone's happy.

An excellent story! You did a great job of building the tension by having him go to her home multiple times before they get down and dirty.

Sorry...only 4 Stars here...the GLARING mistakes in grammar are too distracting...make this seem like a junior-high-schooler wrote this...

Definitely a stroke story...and a good one...

Gonna read the 2nd chapter, see if it is better (I hope)...?????🥴👍🌋

wow, not perfect, but dam close,,liked it, well written, very erotic,,way too short,,,glad there is a ch 2 or i would punch you right in the threw, through,,aahhh throat!!

It is a hot story but the bad grammar and spelling is due to his nerves of horniness?! I would of LOVED more boob action as far as he talked about her great tits and nips he didn't suck em, bite, rub or lick as much as I hoped he would. That is my ticket to climax when my nips are played with and sucked hard! Soooo horny now!

Need to proofread, too many mistakes.

You need a final chapter.

think he was very very lucky...nothing quite like a horny milf...

while not a surprise a pity she had a smooth bald snapper...much prefer a proper adult woman's muffin, neatly trimmed...

Some kids had all the luck. I got one BJ from the mother of a girl I almost dated. That was it for Cougar mentoring.

But I'd have LOVED to gotten what Chris did.

I think you completely forgot about the kids in the house who all would have been woken up by the screaming and shouting and why is it that the husband always comes home just after the lover has left come on sort it out and one more thing what happened to the maths teacher ?

Thankfully I managed to get “threw” this nonsense. Your characters are really shouting out their passion with her kids in the house?

Leanmachine3 needs an editor. I'm not sure grinded and thrusted are even words. Grind and thrust are irregular verbs meaning the past tense does not end in "ed." OH, and through does not mean threw! One goes through a door, but he threw the ball yesterday.

I'm not picking on Leanmachine; these are common errors. I guess it finally got to me while reading this story.

As I said, find an editor.

The "neighbourhood's MILF" talk was a familiar issue to me since my mom was such a hottie back in the 90s, also the only single mother where we lived - what led her reputation into a whorish kind for the wives and into a fuckable scene for the husbands (those were my friend's moms and dads). I must confess mom's outfits and behaviour didn't help to change it.

Eli's hard throbbing 8 inch long very hairy thick cut cock was crushed between his partner's moist warm vaginal walls

Phillip Lamovie fucked his big boobed blonde haired teacher Jan Dennis

At Jan's house she and Phil drank beer and pashed off and Jan ripped off Phil's shirt and rubbed her gigantic pale boobs against his massive thick jet black hairy chest and they then had steamy 69 style oral sex

After this Jan lied on her back with her legs spread wide open and Phil rammed his hard throbbing 8 inch long jet black hairy thick cut teenage cock deep inside her soaking wet blonde hairy cunt which was flooded by a raging river of steaming hot teenage cock cream

A good read! Thanks for sharing!

mmm, nice!

Steady build to a nice climax. It's got a good pace to it. Read it, loved it, busted a huge nut to it. Thanks!

Those kids must sleep like the dead with all the yelling and screaming and cleaning all that food from the floor is not fun, maybe next time a desk will do if you want to have the sweeping stuff off the table action. The build-up to the sex was good, the grammatical errors were only slightly annoying. Too bad it was a cheat story.

Great story but poorly written.

It's "yeah" not ya...

The did not through her dress off, she threw it off.

But please keep telling the exploits of Chris and Mrs. Jensen.

We want so much more.

Decent story, but very jarring each of the three times you said through when you meant threw. And you obviously know better because one time you did say threw.

I love stories about women who have husbands that dead dicks and the women are still full of life and lust. She needs fuck several times a week, and everyone in the house is happier because she is satisfied

You used the many variations of threw, through.

But I do not remember the correct usage used once.

Good story

Good, hot story with great descriptions. Well written except for the homophones. So she’s just another cheating slut. I definitely like stories where no one’s married.

Bill S.

How could he be so lucky. I certainly desired some of my friends' moms, but was just not lucky like Chris. What an education he is going to receive. I suspect Mrs. Jenson had given a mild sedative to the kids to make sure they would not wake up. Such encounters with a Mrs. Jensen of my own would have left me so better prepared for later life.

Very hot. I would love it to meet a milf like that.

Proofread! Misspelled words, wrong capitalization in first paragraph = one star.

WOW pretty fucking weird world out there. Good luck to you all use protection and and try to be safe.

Not a fan of cheaters.

Especially one that would do so with their children in the house.

I would love to see part two of Mrs Jenson and Chris

I overheard some neighbors talking about a hot MILF. I was working on my side of our privacy fence. Then to my surprise I listened more and they were talking about my wife. They also were talking about our 2 daughters. It was a group of high-school and college students. I knew most of the voices that I was hearing. I had started my phone recording. They started making bets who could win my 3 girls over my wife and 2 daughters. I had heard enough of this and needed to talk to my girls. That night was Friday and our oldest daughter would be home from college so I thought I had to talk to them immediately. After we ate I said we all needed to talk. Amber my wife looked at me like what's going on? Our oldest daughter was engaged to a fine young man her age she met at college our daughter in high-school was serious about a boy in her class and I was pretty sure until today that she was faithful. I gave my speech and they all look shocked and said that they couldn't believe that I would have doubts about any of them and was acting upset that I had doubts. They were getting pretty upset. Amber said we needed to talk privately. I said no you need to listen to me. I will not tolerate any BS period. Shit was starting to hit the fan. I YELLED STOP IT NOW AND LISTEN TO THIS. I played the recording. They all were quiet. When I shut it off I said now listen to me closely. Amber I forgave you when we were in high-school and I will be divorcing you if you ever cheat again. If you want a divorce tell me right now and I will give you a divorce. She started crying saying it was nothing but a little flirting with those boys and I for sure don't want a divorce please I will quit. Girls you are not married but one of you are engaged and the other is in a serious relationship. I will not stand by you if either disrespects their man and I will play them the recording. Things settled down and went back to normal. I was happy and so was my girls.

Great Love Story Five Stars She Sure Liked Her Pussy ate and sucked good cock RW

Wouldn't it be funny if the husband caught them and beat the shit out of him and then filed for divorce. Who's the real father of the 3 children.? So many questions. Try writing a story about normal man standing up for his family and how to handle a situation like this.

kids went out I suppose||||||||||||||||

The "similar stories" on the last page must include a category/filter for ESL.

I need to "bust" out of reading lousy stories.

Very predictable and writing was pedestrian

Your first exchange of dialogue is full of mistakes, so I didn't bother with the rest.

During a party I held for my neighbors, the MILF across the street overheard me say to another guest, "Show me a woman who's never had her pussy licked, and I'll show you a wife that I can steal!" Later that night, she cornered me in the dark hallway way and with a straight face told me that she's never had her pussy licked and that her husband won't, but she wanted me in the worst way to be the first. I was 25 and single and threw caution to the wind and introduced her to oral sex like she's never had before, giving her multiple orgasms practically nonstop. Then, I'd get my reward when she'd suck my big throbbing cock and would let me fuck her pussy nice & hard!

Not bad but you can't seen to decide which you're or your to use.

YOU'RE = YOU ARE

YOUR = YOUR CAR

Back when I was in school two things happened that I would like to know what would have happened if it happened today. One a boy wouldn't let a teacher alone until the teacher threatened the parents. The boy went transferred to a different school. The other was a teacher football coach got a cheerleader pregnant that teacher left soon.

Great Love Story Five Stars Quite a Fuck

Too much fantasy, I'd like to see fewer boyhood dreams but more manly thoughts.

FIVE STARS Julie Jensen is one HOT FUCKING CUNT I HOPE SHE GETS KNOCKED UP SHE NEEDS TO BE PREGNANT!!

Question, why mention this Mrs Jones woman if she was not to be the focal of the story? It started off with her then switched to Mrs Jensen from three houses down on Chris' birthday. WTF!

Liked the urgency of the sex, the "I gotta have you in me now!!" heat of passion. On the other hand, "Monstrous double D's" and shaved pussy. Oy vey....as one of the other commenters said, it's more believable if she has somewhat more normal sized tits. I'd bet there are quite a few women who shave clean, but probably many more who just leave their pussies alone, or maybe trim for swimsuit season. On the whole, a fun read. And there's nothing wrong with a married woman who gives it up to the neighbor kid. Gotta have a little fun, right?? Be funny if she got knocked up from that one short encounter.

This is a re-read for me; not sure how many times but several. A consider this a very good story. Contrary to what the anonymous naysayers have offered I do not see it as unbelievable or implausible. But whether it is or not the fact is the story is quite erotic and a rousing; which I think is what this site tries to offer the readers who visit. Well done leanmachine3 ! Don’t take those who choose to not be known seriously. if they can’t move from anonymity then there opinion is worthless. I do think a little more attention to proofing would enhance your ver good stories.

Thank you for braving the stupidity of anonymous ignorant folks to share your creativity. John

Lost me at “monstrous double D’s”

Jullie Jensen is one hot Fucking MILF must be Horny for cock. Five Stars Great Story hope for a second story, RW

Great Love Story Hot MiLF RW

Loved the story. thanks

joe

It had potential, but would have been better if it hadn't been so exaggerated. Normal breasts would have been far better than "double-D titties". Come on. Story telling works better if it's believable rather than over the top. A grammar check would help too. For example "as she through her arms around me" should have been "as she threw her arms around me". In other words, the piece needs to be a little less far fetched, and to be copy edited. That would greatly improve both the readability and the eroticism.

So I realize the grammar was atrocious but besides that, this story just felt klunky. For fiction to be good, it has to be believable. I personally just never thought, I can see this happening. Even science fiction or fantasy stories have to create a believable world. This just wasn’t believable. And like it has been said, you really need an editor.

"Don't worry they won't even notice your gone."

YOU'RE = YOU ARE GONE

YOUR = THEY OWN SOMETHING CALLED "GONE"

It was a great story with a splash of humor very well done. I’ve had situations like this happen to me many times. Forget the haters, you are an excellent writer.

Just another cheating whore that can’t be a decent woman. Now she’s fucking little boys that don’t know their ass from a whole in the ground.

Seven inches. Got it. And what did you keep messaging those titties..I'm guessing 😗😙😚

This is a beautiful story of an 18-year-old boy who gets to fuck a really hot and gorgeous MILF, and gets a pair of her black panties to remember her by. It is a perfect stand-alone story, but with your adept writing skills it certainly could stand a sequel! After all, he already has a date with the lady when her husband is going to be away, and there are many possibilities for further development of their "intimacies". And of course there is his HS Teacher with the big boobs that he could now seduce and further develop his fucking skills with. And that could easily lead to him moving on to do all the the attractive ladies that his mom has as friends. And perhaps it could even lead to his doing his mom, after she finds out what he has been doing to all her friends! Just and idea, but in any case, Thanx for the very heartwarming and erotic Read!

Re: Anon who said:

"Perhaps I'm just to old, but why would an attractive, mature wife with children want to do anything with a cock with an immature, bumbling idiot attached to it?"

I'm also too (sic) old now, but there can be many reasons. I lost my virginity at 18 to the mother of a friend of my little sister. It started when my sis asked if I would give a ride to the mom. I don't recall what the reason was, maybe a car in the shop but I really do not remember. My sister and her friend of the same age (14) were also in the car. The mom flirted with me a bit, making comments about my 'broad shoulders' and such. It was so obvious that after the ride when we were alone my little sister said something like "Please don't sleep with (her friend's name) mom." This also made me aware that my little sister at 14 was fairly aware of human sexuality. But it happened, and then was repeated a few times. She was the wife of an officer who was away for months on end, and all I can guess was that she was sexually frustrated.

And then later at about 23 I had a coworker who was an older woman. Probably early 40s. Very trim and attractive for her age. One day she said something like "What do people around here do for fun?" and I was clue-full enough to ask her if she'd like to go to a bar after work. She also had a young daughter, about 14, who was very cute. The mom and I had a brief relationship, and many years later (about 5 or so) I was driving through my older sister's neighborhood with my younger sister in the car, and spotted the daughter walking along the sidewalk. I stopped to say "Hi!" and as it turned out the daughter knew my little sister as they had been in the same grade together in HS. I knew from my sister's age that she had to be over 18, so I asked her out and she said yes. But when I called her later to make a date she said her mom (she was still living at home) said she couldn't go out with me. A shame, because she was very cute, but I can understand the mom not wanting to have her girl be sleeping with the same guy she had been sleeping with a few years ago, so I let it go.

So yeah, it's not outrageous for an older woman to start up a relationship with a younger man. I'm not saying that this story is real, because it is almost certainly not, I'm just saying that my own experience tells me that there are actual reasons why an older woman might want a sexual relationship with a younger man, despite his sexual inexperience.

Oh wow, so much anonymous hate. Do you guys want to turn this story into a "Burn The Bitch" fantasy? Who knows, the hubby may be an unattentive jerk having his own affair or maybe he's a cuckold and knows what the wife's doing and if so deserves to lose her to the 18-year-old. It's only a story guys. Relax, this is only the first chapter. I liked it and gave it 5 stars.

Even for a fantasy this is cringe.

Funny story. I think there should be another chapter. The husband catches the kicks the home wrecker ass then divorces and gets the children.

Be careful mill's I let it happen to me with an 18 year old neighbor. The mother beat me put me in the hospital,my husband beat the 18 year old up got charged with assault then divorced me. I got the children but when they could choose who they wanted to live with they went to him. Also my parents would not speak to me and 2 siblings wouldn't speak.

Perhaps I'm just to old, but why would an attractive, mature wife with children want to do anything with a cock with an immature, bumbling idiot attached to it?

..."Never been a better time now that your eighteen"

It's YOU'RE.

The story would be good if you knew how to write English. As usual you need a good editor and perhaps a few more years of life experience. This seems to be written by an 18 yr.old or possibly younger person. English was NOT my best subject as I thought since I speak it and read it every day I didn't need to be taught how. But this youngster needs to go back to school.

Attention LIT moderators how did LaurieK get all those idiotic posts past the screening? Another juvenile wannabe posting gibberish in the comments.

Anony Mous

Terrible punctuation and grammar plus so many spelling mistakes it’s obvious this story has never been edited. If the writer has given it a final read through I think they must be barely in their teens, English is not a good subject for them at school, and they don’t read many books. Maybe because they’re so busy wanking over pictures or porn videos. I won’t be bothering reading any more of their work.

Having said all that, without the mistakes it’s a halfway decent story. Well worth a 3.

well written, well paced,,hot mom story,,liked that she is shaved,,i dont dive in hairy pussies,,

Robin Gardner hit pay dirt at a bar in Carlton where she met a hot looking dark haired guy Luke who shouted her plenty of drinks and they then went to Robin's house where they drank wine and pashed off - after this Robin lied on her back with her legs spread wide open and Luke plunged his hard throbbing 8 inch long jet black hairy thick uncut cock deep inside her soaking wet red hairy cunt which was filled with a massive lava flow of molten bubbling cum

Pity that Mrs J's lawn already mowed...should think after 3 kids she could get down with being natural...guess old habits die hard...real men down with bush....

I thought at the end he would wake up from a dream. Thanks for sharing.

Chris is a real lucky boy and Luke Hemsworth loves having his rock hard cock crushed between Gabriella's moist vaginal walls

... and if you're too shy to find a real person to edit your stories, I'm sure it would help.

It seems you've kind of forgotten about the MILF math teacher Mrs. Jones, in the Neighborhood MILF series. Can you please tell us more about that character?

A few weeks ago Ginette Searle went to a pick up bar in the city where she was chattered up by a hot looking guy Billy who had red hair and a red beard and after a few drinks they went to an apartment in St Kilda where they drank wine and pashed off and then had steamy 69 style oral sex - after this Billy lied on his back with his bulging 9 inch long red hairy thick uncut cock pointing skyward and Ginette smeared her soaking wet jet black hairy cunt with lube and then lowered herself on to Billy's massive blood filled beef pole which was buried deep inside her hot pussy and filled her pussy with a lava flow of molten bubbling cum

Do you have a way that you are paying people to "favorite" this story? I am so turned off from the errors and trying to squeeze in every possible description of something. I quit reading the story and read the comments instead. I found that you do have some morons following your total lack of writing skills. Reading the "Neighborhood MILF" should have a disclaimer warning of possibly causing ED. Stick to writing on bathroom walls.

Is everything in your life jet back? Can't say black without adding jet? You are not quite a writer yet but it appears you wanna be.....

Chris is such a lucky boy - the other night Helen Nicopoulos lied on her back with her legs spread wide open and Chris Kiskiras speared his hard throbbing 9 inch long jet black hairy thick uncut cock deep inside her hot wet jet black hairy Greek cunt and then unloading torrents of hot steaming lovely cum

Pirrie Simai has become quite horny of late - a few weeks ago she was spit roasted by Laurie and Elan - Pirrie got down in doggy position and as Elan's 7 inch long throbbing jet black hairy thick cut cock pounded her hot wet jet black hairy cunt she sucked Laurie's bulging dark hairy cut cock

A few weeks ago Robin Gardner found herself in a pick up joint hoping to score and she meet a hot looking guy called Luke who had short spiky heavily gelled jet black hair and 5 day jet black stubble - they had a few drinks and then went to Robin's house where they drank wine and pashed off - this was followed by hot 69 style oral sex and then Robin lied on her back with her legs spread wide open and Luke drilled his 8 inch long throbbing jet black hairy thick uncut cock deep inside her hot wet hairy cunt which was flooded with hot steaming cum

Laurie Knightley & Klaus Puschenjak when in high school had some fun - Laurie went down on his knees and rolled back Klaus's foreskin and took in his mouth the hard thick blonde hairy uncut cock - Klaus then caressed Laurie's awesome dark hairy chest and then went down on the 7 inch long jet black hairy thick cut cock - Klaus then rammed his cock up Laurie's hairy arse hole and shot a load of steaming hot cum

There is plenty of action in the bedroom of Stuart & Michaela Lew - they are going hammer and tongs having 69 style oral sex and then as Michaela lies on her back with her legs spread wide open Stuart rams his donkey sized hard throbbing 8 inch long jet black hairy thick cut cock deep inside her hot wet hairy pussy which is flooded with a lava flow of hot steaming cum

In my mind's eye I can picture David West and I undressing each other down to our boots and socks - we then get in to 69 position and enjoy a feast of cock sucking - I almost choke on David's bulging red hairy thick cut cock and then shoot cum on to his lovely red beard and mouth watering red hairy chest

This is so good I am about to blow - I would love to have my hard cut cock crushed between Shirleen Stanfast's moist warm vaginal walls

I absolutely loved your story. It reminded me of the MILF that lived right next door to me. I fantasized about her for years.

sweet

and THANK YOU for having a "normal" cock.....not the HUGE, MASSIVE, MONSTER that other writers seem so determined to have.

The proof reading could help but again, I liked it. Thanks

Your worst problem is the number of grammatical errors in your story......

Do NOT use a spell checker as it cannot tell you if the right word is used.

A spell checker would have, and probably did, tell you that "through" is the right word when what was needed was "threw".......

That means you need a REAL PERSON, or PERSONS, to read your stories and make corrections before you publish them.

A good editor also can alert you to other mistakes, like saying she "threw her clothes on the ground" (the bedroom has a floor).

Professional writers use editors, many editors, not just one. Of course they pay for the editors whereas you can find editors for free on Lit. I edit for several people on Lit but I'm not looking for any more editing so I'm not giving you a way to contact me.

A hot story can fail because of errors but a half baked story can become hot because it has no errors.

It seems all rooms and homes have very good sound proofing as no one ever hears the screams. stories starting to sound so familiar to one another

Learn to spell. Get an editor. Enjoyed the story but the spelling threw me through the wall!

WOW

Really... Or spell check. Instead of "threw" it was "through" and still I finished THROUGH the story before I THREW my arms up high to utter clenching of my teeth. Story was awesome. Spell check would really be great. Not all readers would read through the end. Glad your story was 2 pages. More would really freak me cause of all the misused words.

It must be sad to have three children who are all deaf...

I mean, really, if you're going to write about some babysitter and the kids' parents having sex and screaming their heads off...? You better have a real good reason for kids to not come busting in either all scared or to find out what's wrong..

i need a hot chick to fuck.

Enough description to allow every man to view Julie as his mind's fantasy woman, but not too specific to cause doubt. Great story about a boy's dream come true. It was good not to describe Mr. Jensen; kept him from being a problem. Will the next installment be about the hot math teacher, Mrs. Jones? encore!!

Great preparation of the scene - and then the climax! OMG! You have to write more!