All Comments on 'Neighborhood Thrills'

This was a well written story. I would like to have you continue for more chapters.

a wonderfully writen story....makes me all excited and begging for more

I will give the author one thing, he/she has an imagination and that is about all.

please give us more

I thoroughly enjoyed that story. The detail was immense and accurate, and both characters were entirely believable. I can only look forward to chapter two (Holly) and chapter three - the threesome.

Looking forward to reading more of your writings.

Miranda

Now we need more, her mom, maybe a couple more neighborhood ladies. Maybe even Hollys mom, or some more of her family!!!!!

Good all around and a real turn-on. But don't you think that Alyssa is a little too young to be that worldly? It would be a lot more realistic to make her 20 instead of 18.

My God, I think I want to be a woman!

the best stories I've read on this site. I love your balance of details and character development, and the plot/storyline just keeps me wanting to read more. Thank You!

Very hot & erotic story with the perfect touch of seduction!

Excellent !

you painted a lovely word-picture of them and their SMOKINg hot action

really looking forward to the next chapters

Excellent

I was turned off by the reference to smoking. Fagash mouths . Ugh!

I very much like the pace at the beginning of hot story but seemed a little quick towards the end. Very well written!