All Comments on 'Neighbors'

5 stars. I always like your stories and when I see your handle, I always read it. I liked the characters and the plot. The flow was good. I will continue to look for your stories. Thanks for your time and imagination.

down - rite excellent

I suppose this is a romance but it was rather raunchy

If Ellen lives next door (Julie said she lives across the street) how could he see in her garage?

Aside from that minor issue, a fun story.

I think I like your single chapter stories best because I don’t have to wait for the ending. Thanks

And, God know, we can always use Happy. 5*

I tried hard to like Jerrod. I couldn't. If you were trying to make him sensitive in some fashion it didn't work. I found him crude in his thoughts and his actions. Romance- it was difficult to see. There were so many misused words, poor punctuation, and awkward sentences I found myself not enjoying what I thought was a fairly good plot. This story would have benefited from a strong edit. I hope these comments serve to help you improve your writing.

Great job. Really enjoyed

Very good as usual keep them coming.

I hate to say it and I feel guilty for doing it, but this wasn't your best effort.

Too many tangents in a 4 lit page story... I'd have preferred if you had skipped the whole Ms. Brady tangent for a little bit more development of the relationship between Jerrod and Juli.

I'm still giving you 5/5 and I'll still be looking forward to your next story, but tbh, I think you tried to cram too many things into a story this short...

I know you wanted a break and were thinking of stopping for a while, and I remain exceedingly grateful that you are still writing at the moment, but I'd rather wait for something you take your time with and feel passionate about.

Great little romantic fantasy! You never disappoint.

5 stars but I knew that before I read it.

Cheers

SAGE

When I started reading this story I had to stop after a bit and check which category it was in. It said 'Romance' but it was more like 'Exhibitionist & Voyeur'. I almost stopped reading, but instead skipped ahead a ways and got to the real romance part. Sorry, but I'm not interested in E&V. The rest of the story was good, but didn't have the depth of characters your other stories have. Sorry.

The perfect romance story for literotica. Warms the heart and wets the twat. Oh! It tickled my funny bone as well. 🥳 Kudos

-Krista

I don't think I've ever rated one of your stories so low. It needed editing and your main character was too crude for my tastes.

Don't listen to "RAW"... What an ass... I think it was a great story. Fact is, probably like other neighborhoods u just know all their secrets. Good Job !!!

The only thing that I can say is great as usual. Thank you and have a Merry Christmas.

Result, that means everyone got want they wanted and/or deserved. Keep on scribbling 5*s

Very good