All Comments on 'Neighbors'

Wow, gave up after 4 pages to go and play with my pre cum soaked cock. My wife and sister in the kitchen, me thinking i was fucking one while the other one sat on my face. The best orgasm i have ever had. Thanks.

I thought it was a great story, came across as realistic with people trying to come to grips with what turns them on without going farther then their spouse will be on with.

In the real world it is mostly a series of small steps to find your comfort level and establishing rules at each step even if the rules change after each activity. I think this showed that well and I hope to see more chapters soon.

Outstanding tale. Scorching hot because it is full of sexual tension and reluctance. Overcome!

Loved this story. Made me so hard. Can't wait for the next chapter

Fun and games with the neighbors!

4

Well up to your usual high standard. Erotic, well-written, just about believable, and a storyline which flows nicely. Almost no grammatical errors, and just the one repeated spelling issue: areola, plural areolae or just maybe areolas. You did use areolae just once. Anyway, thanks for a most enjoyable read.

Fantastic!!!

Outstanding and well written as usual. Loved revisiting Jason and Terri from your other story. I can’t remember which story they appeared in though. Just remember the details of the couples splitting up after meeting at the mall.

Loved the story from beginning to end ,,, that's what happens when it's entertaining. Wish I was in close neighbourhood like the one described here. Great writing and dialogue which pushed me to vote for a nice 5 stars. Hopefully, we will see more chapters coming so we can learn what new dare games the characters come up with. Nice work !

The beginning tease with Jaz and Greg was good. The party seemed like a good idea , but did not work for me. Better to have just stayed with the Jaz and Greg storyline.

This shit head hates his wife so much he never wants name her! How the hell do you write a story so long and not mention her name, you idiot? He does this in every story.

0-1 star. Nicely written but he plot fell out quickly. They went from barely there sexually to top fuel swingers in a couple of days. Unreal. Mark should divorce her. :)

This is one of my favorites in your catalog of stories. I have reread it several times. I also encourage you to write a sequel. I’d like to see how you portray Mary’s continuing to open up to her suppressed libido. How about more adventures with Jaz and Greg, and perhaps Mary will seduce her co-worker, Craig too?

A great story. Five stars. Again with the nay sayers. If they think your stories are stupid, why do they keep reading them? Personally, I loved this and many of your other stories.

Everything worked for me except the group fuck at the end. That turned it into common paperback book porno.